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求懂英语的帮助改正错误。标点和一撇没有不用改。主要是语法

3. all kinds of vegetables
vegetables are healthy food .we have beans ,potatoes,tomatoes and broccoli.i like to eat beans and potatoes .i don t like broccoli .but my father says it is very healthy .so i eating some broccoli.
then ,we eating some steamed stuffed buns and dumplings .we ate and chat ,each message said,food is delicious .we eat very full. this is really happy new year s eve dinner.
after dinner ,we eat some strawberry and oranges .eat some chocolate and candy.we together in front of the tv watching spring festival gala evening.we talking and laughing .very happy today.
英语作业，我有些是用有道翻译出来的可能不太对

Answer 1

so i eating some broccoli.把eating改成eat

then ,we eating some steamed stuffed buns and dumplings.开头几个单词改成we also eat

we ate and chat ,each message said, food is delicious .we eat very full.全句改成we eat and chat. the food is delicious. we are very full.

下一句this is后面加a

strawberry开始改成strawberries, oranges, chocolate and candies.

最后一句改成we are in front of the tv watching spring festival gala together. we talk and laugh. I am very happy today.

建议全文改成一般过去时，因为读到后面感觉这是一篇类似日记的英语作业。。

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Answer 2

so i eating some broccoli.改成 so I ate some broccoli
then ,we eating some steamed stuffed buns and dumplings 中eating 改成ate
this is really happy new year s eve dinner.改this is （a）really happy new year s eve dinner.
we （sit）together in front of the tv watching spring festival gala evening.

Answer 3

Eating vegetables provides health benefits.There are beans ,potatoes,tomatoes and broccoli.I prefer eating beans and potatoes except broccoli .My father advised me that broccoli is good for health , so I started eating broccoli after listening to his advice.
After that ,we ate some steamed stuffed buns and dumplings We chatted while we were eating. The food was delicious and made us all very full.This was really a happy new year's eve dinner.
After dinner ,we ate some strawberries ,oranges, chocolates and candies. Then we watch the Spring Festival program which begins from evening . We chatted and laughed, we were very happy.

是过去的事情了，必须用past tense,但是某些情况下要用present tense。怎么说呢…… 语法这东西很难在这里解释，书本有解释

有些句子你用的也对的，但是我觉得那样些会更好一些，就帮你换了句型……