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The College Teachers in My Mind
As society is filled with all kinds of people ，I have seen all sorts of teachers during two years of my college life.They performs are distinctive and personalities are different ,but there is no doubt that they are respected.
In my opinion, most of the teachers here at college fall into two categories：seniority type teacher and friend type teacher.
A lot of Teachers who have taught us are seniority style. Generally ，they are much more practiced in giving instruction.Which means there is a deeper gap between students and them.Now that ，we call them parent type teacher， they may have something similar to our parents.For example， concern and love.Teaching with heart and soul is their most salient feature. Although older in age brings generation gap between teachers and students，it also makes them have more experience in teaching and profound acknowledge.
Friend type teacher is different from seniority type teacher .They are as common as an old shove , full of juice and they like our friends .Their class is funny and humorous, they are not very strict and know the better way to deal with students.Friend type teacher are generally younger, they believe that through sincere they will be good to communicate with students. 展开
As society is filled with all kinds of people ，I have seen all sorts of teachers during two years of my college life.They performs are distinctive and personalities are different ,but there is no doubt that they are respected.
In my opinion, most of the teachers here at college fall into two categories：seniority type teacher and friend type teacher.
A lot of Teachers who have taught us are seniority style. Generally ，they are much more practiced in giving instruction.Which means there is a deeper gap between students and them.Now that ，we call them parent type teacher， they may have something similar to our parents.For example， concern and love.Teaching with heart and soul is their most salient feature. Although older in age brings generation gap between teachers and students，it also makes them have more experience in teaching and profound acknowledge.
Friend type teacher is different from seniority type teacher .They are as common as an old shove , full of juice and they like our friends .Their class is funny and humorous, they are not very strict and know the better way to deal with students.Friend type teacher are generally younger, they believe that through sincere they will be good to communicate with students. 展开
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下面是我修改过的 I'm a student in Yizhuang Primary School.I love this new school. There are four buildings in our school.They're Building Yide, Building Yizhi,Building Yijian and a teaching building.The Building Yide and Building Yizhi are the places for us to study.The YiJian Building is the place for activity.The students usually go running and do some exercise there.There's a playground in our school. it is surrounded by trees.When spring comes,the trees turn green and they make our school more nice. I'm in class two grade six.Our classroom is big,also very bright.Our classroom has a TV,two blackboard,a lot of desks and chairs.I study in this claroom from Monday to Friday. I love this new school!
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这是写大学老师的。。。。
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