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diagreeoragree：itisimpossibletobecompletelyhonestwithyourfriendFriendsplayanessential...
diagree or agree：it is impossible to be completely honest with your friend
Friends play an essential role in our lives, no matter what difficulties and happiness we meet, they can share the sorrow and pleasure with us.However, I believe we can not be totally honest with our friend no matter how close we are.
First, it is important to keep a private space for ourselves. Everyone has their secrets that is reluctant to be known by others , for instance, some physically shortcoming, some miserable memories, some prestige to others ,etc. It cannot be equal to the distrust ,some of these may refer to others' interests or they just don not want to mention it again. Even though the closest friend , they understand their friend well in some circumstances. Moreover, I think to be totally honest is impossible because people tend to protect themselves automatically.
Second, sometimes honesty can hurt others just as a sharp knife penetrated people's heart. Supposing an institution that your friend has got a bad grade on a test, though you aware that she is really not good at studying and cannot follow what the teacher said, you had better not tell her the low score derives from her foolish.Maybe it is better to convince her it is her ignoring about studying that cause this problem.Don not be sincere occasionally is an effective way to comfort your friends.
Finally, we have our responsibilities to protect some vital secrets, like our company's essential data. To be an employee, we have the duty to be loyal to our company even in the expense of telling a lie to our friends. If our friends are sincere friends, they will understand our choice.
In brief, don't be honest all the time can never destroy our friendship, on the contrary, it can give us some personal space and have a better way to know about others. Besides, there are some principles to be obeyed in the friendship, that is we can never merely consider our feeling but ignore the terrible influence it will make. 展开
Friends play an essential role in our lives, no matter what difficulties and happiness we meet, they can share the sorrow and pleasure with us.However, I believe we can not be totally honest with our friend no matter how close we are.
First, it is important to keep a private space for ourselves. Everyone has their secrets that is reluctant to be known by others , for instance, some physically shortcoming, some miserable memories, some prestige to others ,etc. It cannot be equal to the distrust ,some of these may refer to others' interests or they just don not want to mention it again. Even though the closest friend , they understand their friend well in some circumstances. Moreover, I think to be totally honest is impossible because people tend to protect themselves automatically.
Second, sometimes honesty can hurt others just as a sharp knife penetrated people's heart. Supposing an institution that your friend has got a bad grade on a test, though you aware that she is really not good at studying and cannot follow what the teacher said, you had better not tell her the low score derives from her foolish.Maybe it is better to convince her it is her ignoring about studying that cause this problem.Don not be sincere occasionally is an effective way to comfort your friends.
Finally, we have our responsibilities to protect some vital secrets, like our company's essential data. To be an employee, we have the duty to be loyal to our company even in the expense of telling a lie to our friends. If our friends are sincere friends, they will understand our choice.
In brief, don't be honest all the time can never destroy our friendship, on the contrary, it can give us some personal space and have a better way to know about others. Besides, there are some principles to be obeyed in the friendship, that is we can never merely consider our feeling but ignore the terrible influence it will make. 展开
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有些语法错误。。比如说Don not be sincere occasionally is....可以改成不定式。。还有是do not. 第二段的意思不太连贯。。。字数少了点。。。例子要再specific一点。。。展开说。。。第一段可以先把三个原因列一下。。。让主题更明确。。。
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