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2013-02-23 · 最想被夸「你懂的真多」
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Parents' love for their children is naturally(改为natural) and understandable. They are not willing to let their chlkdren take the crowding (改为crowded)buses . But this practice seems to do much (改为more)harm than good to these kids. It is not simple(改为simply) a question of taking a taxi. It involved(改为involves) the parents' deucation of(改为to) their children in the term of character training in the(去掉the) making of a man. In my opinion, no matter how wealthy a family is ,they should (加上not)spoil their children in the process of personality development . However, they should do something to temper their children to endure hardship of life. They should let their children bear in mind what(改为that) money does not come easily and something (改为nothing)can be achieved without sweat and tears.
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第一行:naturally→natural
第二行:the去掉;crowding→crowded;much→more
第三行:simple→simply;involved→involves;in the terms of中的the去掉
第四行:should→would
第六行:temper→tempt;what→that
第七行:something→nothing
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