Question

帮忙看一下这篇英语短文的语法问题!急~~~!!

My winter holiday is very dull. I stay at home for most of time. I always homework. I usually help my parents do household chores. During winter break we have had a happy Spring Festival. My father and mother gave me a prepared New Year's money. I and my fellow students to do volunteer bookstores and supermarkets. We work very hard. I have read some books and read "Affan up" the film. It is very interesting. 如果有语法问题麻烦标注是哪里并更正。谢谢

Answer 1

My
winter
holiday
is
very
dull.
此句建议用过去时，改为:My
winter
holiday
was
very
dull.
I
stay
at
home
for
most
of
time.
此句时态不对，因为有for，所以要用完成时，而且应该是most
of
(the)
time，原句中缺少了定冠词，改为:I
have
stayed
at
home
for
most
of
the
time.
I
always
homework.
此句缺少动词，改为:I
always
did
my
homework.
但是我建议这句句子和上面那句合并较好，即:I
have
stayed
at
home
for
most
of
the
time.+I
have
always
done
my
homework.→I
have
stayed
at
home
and
done
my
homework
for
most
of
the
time.
I
usually
help
my
parents
do
household
chores.
这里没必要用usually,且help正确的用法是help
sb.
to
do
sth.
，改为:I
helped
my
parents
to
do
some
household
chores.
During
winter
break
we
have
had
a
happy
Spring
Festival.
此句中寒假的正确表达是winter
vacation而不是winter
break，且这里可直接用一般过去时而非现在完成时，改为:During
winter
vacation
we
had
a
happy
Spring
Festival.
My
father
and
mother
gave
me
a
prepared
New
Year's
money.
money不可数所以不能用a而是用定冠词the，new
year直接小写就可以了，还有如果你想用prepare不如这样写，改为:My
father
and
mother
prepared
the
new
year's
money
for
me.(不用prepare的话则可写成:My
father
and
mother
gave
me
the
new
year's
money.)
I
and
my
fellow
students
to
do
volunteer
bookstores
and
supermarkets.
英语里习惯把I放在最后，如:You，he
and
"I";fellow是同学的意思，所以my
fellow
students的意思就成了“我的同学学生”，还是去掉students好，还有这里不需要在动词前加to，“volunteer
bookstores
and
supermarkets”→
bookstores
and
supermarkets'
volunteer(s),改为:My
fellow
and
I
became
the
bookstores
and
supermarkets'
volunteers.
We
work
very
hard.
这里要用过去时，改为:We
worked
very
hard.
I
have
read
some
books
and
read
"Affan
up"
the
film.
用过去时就可以了，还有电影是watch的而不是read的，the
film不能放在
Affan
up后面，改为:I
read
some
books
and
watched
a
film
called
"Affan
up"
.
It
is
very
interesting.
前面提到了some
books
and
watched
a
film
called
"Affan
up"，所以it
is变成they
are
~~改为:They
are
very
interesting.
整理后全文如下:My
winter
holiday
was
very
dull.
I
have
stayed
at
home
and
done
my
homework
for
most
of
the
time.I
helped
my
parents
to
do
some
household
chores.
During
winter
vacation
we
had
a
happy
Spring
Festival.
My
father
and
mother
prepared
the
new
year's
money
for
me.
My
fellow
and
I
became
the
bookstores
and
supermarkets'
volunteers.
We
worked
very
hard.
I
read
some
books
and
watched
a
film
called
"Affan
up"
.
They
are
very
interesting.
你总体写的很好哦~~
回答完毕~~，希望能帮到你。