Question

帮我看一下，英语作文的语法点有木有错,在线等

Famil Dinner On New Year's Eve
I have a big family .On new year,there is a big family dinner.My favorite two dish is "the west lake vinegar fish" and "sweet and sour pork ribs",but I don't eat them.I don't want to be fat .My father's favorite dish is "Salt and pepper shrimp",but I don't think it healthy.My mother's favorite dish is "sand pot of fish head tofu",it is yummy.

Answer 1

1.Famil应该是Family吧。
2.I don't want to be fat 。我不想成为胖？应该是I don't want to 【get】 fat.我不想变胖。
3..My favorite two dish 【is 】？应该是【are】吧。
4.but I don't think it healthy应该是 but I don't think it 【is】healthy
5.正文中On new year应该是【On New Year's Eve 】
这个时态如果是过去式的话
have-had is-was don‘t-didn’t
我觉得现在这个时态应该也可以。

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Answer 2

家庭年夜饭
我有一个大家庭。在新的一年里，有一个大的家庭晚餐。我最喜欢的两道菜是“西湖醋鱼”和“糖醋排骨”，但是我不吃。我不想发胖。我爸爸最喜欢的菜是“盐和胡椒虾”，但我不认为它健康。我的母亲最喜欢的菜是“鱼头豆腐”砂壶，它是美味的。
语句有点不通

Answer 3

1、Famil 改为Family 2、.On new year改为On New Year's Eve 3、dish is改为dishes are 4. I don't eat them改为I didn't eat them 5、there is a big family 改为there was a big family 6. healthy改为被good to health。