Question

请大家看看我的这篇英语作文有什么错误，谢谢，有错误的请帮忙指正。

可以不用过去式的。

On weekend, I go to the zoo with my parents. The zoo is so big and beautiful.
Look! Here are two pandas .They are so cute . All the pandas like to eat bamboos.
After that ,I see three monkeys .They are so naughty . They like bananas best.
Maybe they think bananas are delicious .Then , I see a elephant .It's too big.
I like elephants,because they are cute ,too. Last, I see many brids. They like to eat the bread crumbs. I take a photo of them.
This is my a little trip.
I am so happy!

Answer 1

Last weekend, my parents and I go to the zoo. The zoo is so big, beautiful! Here are two panda. They are so lovely. All the pandas like to eat bamboo. Since then, I see three monkeys. They can be very naughty. They like the banana. Maybe they think bananas are delicious. Then, I saw an elephant. It's too big. I like elephants, because they are very cute, too. Finally, I see a lot of birds. They like to eat bread crumbs. I took pictures of them. This is a small travel I. I really enjoyed myself.
上周末，我和父母一起去动物园。动物园是那么大，看美丽的！这里有两个熊猫。他们是那么可爱。所有的大熊猫喜欢吃竹子。此后，我看见三只猴子。它们也很顽皮。他们最喜欢香蕉。也许他们认为香蕉是美味的。然后，我看到一头大象。它太大了。我喜欢大象，因为它们很可爱，太。最后，我看到许多鸟。他们喜欢吃的面包屑。我把他们的照片。这是我的一个小小的旅行。我真是太高兴了！
这个和你的意思一样，你可以借鉴

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你修改的？

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是啊，咋了

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那个 ，既然你用了saw 那你的go to 不是应该是went to 了么？

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这样也可以啊

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同样的谢谢你～

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不客气

Answer 2

They like bananas best. ---------Their favorite food is banana.
I see a elephant -------------I see an elephant.
I like elephants,because they are cute ,too.----------I like elephants, because they are also very cute.
还有就是文中的so，比如The zoo is so big均可以换为very,变为the zoo is very big会好一点。

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谢谢 不过banana 不是可数的么？ 那不是应该是bananas 然后BE动词是不是应该是are？

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这里只是表明他们喜欢吃的食物是香蕉，香蕉在这里是一种水果的名称，而不是指一定数量的香蕉。

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原来是这样 谢谢了~

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不用客气

Answer 3

I see a elephant
a改为an （elephant中的e发的是元音）

It's too big.改为It's very big（too表示程度有点过头了）
This is my a little trip可以改为This is a little trip of mine（语法问题）

Answer 4

.It's too big.为it's big too.

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too 不是也可以为非常的意思么？ 哪里错了？ it's big too。我前面没有说哪个动物big ，哪里来的too？

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对呀，所以错了！稍等·我叫我妈解答，我妈是英语老师，他正忙，稍等一会儿

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too 不是也可以为非常的意思么？

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我妈：The zoo is so big and beautiful.
Look! Here are two pandas .They are so cute . 第一行so和cute重复

, I see a elephant 为an elephant
This is my a little trip.改为
This is my trip就OK了！

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同样感谢～　　谢谢了

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555~~~没别采纳总得顶啊！我都被老妈揍了！！

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弱弱的问个问题 顶是赞同？

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谢谢！

Answer 5

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