Question

求英语达人看看以下3篇小作文有无错误。我英语不大好，因为英语作业（小学六年级）不会写。所以。。

题目：Sperm Whale
内容：A sperm whale is 15 meters.It's 35 tons.It has 50 teeth.Each up to 20 cm long.Its tail is 8 meters long.It likes eat squid,lobsters and small sharks.It can dive into the deep cold water.

题目：Killer Whale
内容：A killer whale is 8 meters .It's 3600kg . It has 40 teeth . Each up to 20 cm long. Its tail is 6 meters long.It likes eat fish ,birds,seals and even whales.It is a good swimmer.It can jump out of water.

题目：Blue Whale
内容：Blue whale is the biggest animal in the world.It's 30 meters.It's 150 tons.As much as 15 elephants.It likes eat small fish and sea plants,4-5 tons of each day.It swim 28 kilometers per hour.It can spray water into the air.

Answer 1

题目：Sperm Whale
内容：A sperm whale is about 15 meters long and about 35 tons heavy. It has 50 teeth, each up to 20 cm long. Its tail is about 8 meters. It likes eating squid, lobsters and small sharks. It can also dive into the deep cold water.

题目：Killer Whale
内容：A killer whale is about 8 meters and about 3600 kg heavy. It has 40 teeth, ach up to 20 cm long. Its tail is about 6 meters long. It likes eating fish, birds, seals and even whales. It is a good swimmer and it can also jump out of water.

题目：Blue Whale
内容：A blue whale is the biggest animal in the world. It's about 30 meters and about 150 tons heacy. Its weight is as much as 15 elephants'!!! It likes eating small fish and sea plants, about 4-5 tons of each day. It can swim 28 kilometers per hour and can also spray water into the air.

哎呦小妹妹，有不少错误呢以后注意下啊。

1）你不停地重复 It 肿么肿么地 It 肿么肿么地，这会让你的读者觉得语言生硬而且读起来又无聊又毫无生气。用些简单的 and 还有 also 就能够给整片文章增加一些乐趣哦而且也会显得更有层次感。（对于小学六年级来说已经够了。但是小妹妹如果你到了初一的话估计会有些吃力呢~要加油哦~）

2）like 和 love 的后面一定要加 to do 或者 doing. 从来没有加动词原形的情况呢。记牢哦。

3）还有就是，整片文章没有一丁点点儿起伏呢那会很无聊哎~ 适当地用一些感叹句会有很大的帮助呢~

【上面的文章我已经修改过了。希望你能够喜欢并欣赏我真正花了心思进去的回答哦。谢谢~】

Answer 2

Each up to 20 cm long动词在哪？

It likes eat squid,lobsters and small sharks哪个是动词？

It's 35 tons（they weigh 35 tons on average）所有鲸鱼不能都这个重量和长度吧？

They are 15 meters long on average 和重量一样没有表示想说明的是长短还是重量
It (can) swim 28 kilometers per hour.

it weighs 150 tons which is as heavy as 15 elephants.
你居然无错误，最幽默就是还给别人翻译成中文

追问

就是有没错误？？

追答

不是我是和另一个人说，他说你没错误，但是其实都是错误

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那你按照文章改一下吧。。

追答

改了你没看吗？

Answer 3

你用百度翻译的呀，中国人和外国人都看不太懂。

Answer 4

你用百度翻译的呀，中国人和外国人都看不太懂。