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ThemostexcitingeventinthisweekwasthesportsmeetonTuesday.Itookpartintheboy's400-Meterr...
The most exciting event in this week was the sports meet on Tuesday.I took part in the boy's 400-Meter relay race,in it there were four teams competing.I was a third to run in my team.At the very beginning,our team's first runner fel behind the others three teams.Then our team's second runner catches up with one of them. When I started to run,I ran as faster as I could hope to change the situation,but it was no use. We got the third place when the race ended,we still thought we were the winners because we have tried our best.
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The most exciting event (去掉in) this week was the sports meet on Tuesday. I took part in the (boy's改成boys') 400-Meter relay race,in (it改成which) there were four teams competing. I was (a改成the) third to run in my team. At the very beginning,our team's first runner fell behind the (others改成other) three teams.Then our team's second runner (catches改成caught) up with one of them. When I started to run,I ran as (faster改成fast) as I could (hope改成hoping) to change the situation,but it was no use. We got the third place when the race ended,(加入but) we still thought we were the winners because we (have改成had) tried our best.
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sport meet 改 sports meeting
the boy's 400-Meter relay race 改 the men's 400-meter relay
in it there were four……改there were four teams in it
I was a third改I was the third bar athletes
At the very begining改At the beginning of running
our team's first runner改The first runner of our team fell behind
our team's second runner 改 the second runner of our team
I ran as faster as I could改I ran fast as I could and I hope
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第一行was改成is。第四行competing改成compete. A third one改为the third one.倒数第五行faster改为fast.winners去掉s
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