Question

初中英语作文，求指点

I'd like to invite you to spend the Spring Festival together with me in Beijing.I know you like chese food ,and I have made a plan to eat them.Come on,we can eat and play around the whole city during the holidays.I look forward to hearing from you soon.题目是要求外国朋友来中国过春节。主要是倒数第二句，不知道语法对不对，我想写“我们可以边吃边转遍北京城”大概这个意思，拜托了

Answer 1

I'd like to invite you to spend the Spring Festival together with me in Beijing. I know you like Chinese food, and so I've made plans to eat all the delicious food while traveling around the city. Come and join me for the holiday. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 大概改了一下， 重新组装了你本来的句子。

Answer 2

We can eat all the delicious food while travel around the city.

Answer 3

1. Chinese写错了，
2. ,and I have made a plan to eat them 改为,and I have got a plan.
3. holidays改为holiday

其他没啥问题，无论语法还是拼写

Answer 4

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