Question

英语作文求批改，谢谢了

【题干】假设你将举办一次周末小聚会，准备邀请你的英国朋友 Tom 参加。请给他写一封英文电
子邮件，内容包括：
•活动主题：为 Lucy 举办生日晚会
•时间、地点
•询问 Tom 能否参加
请以 Li Ke 署名。
Dear Tom
As you and Lucy friend, I am writing this e-mail to invite you to attend Lucy's birthday party.
The party is to be held by my house at the garden at 7 p.m. on May 1st. It aim to celebrate Lucy birthday. It includes a variety of processes, such as the opening apart, the speech-delivering and the dinner party. This is especially for you, so you will have a good time then.
I really hope that you can accept my invitation. I am look forwar to your early reply.
Sincerely
Li Ke

Answer 1

以下是我对你的作文的修整后的结果：
Dear Tom,
I am writing to invite you to Lucy's birthday party which will be held in my garden at 7 p.m. on May 1st. The party is being organized to celebrate Lucy's birthday and will include a variety of activities such as the opening ceremony, speeches, and a dinner party. We are sure you will have a great time!
As a friend of both you and Lucy, I hope you will be able to attend this special event. Can you please let me know whether you can come or not?
Looking forward to your reply and hoping to see you at the party!
Sincerely,
Li Ke
这篇作文的语法和表达有些错误和不够流畅，需要做一些修改和改进。
首先，“As you and Lucy friend”需要改为“As a friend of both you and Lucy”，以使语句更加自然和流畅。
其次，需要将“opening apart”改为“opening ceremony”以使句子更加准确和合理。
需要将“I am look forwar”改为“I am looking forward”，以使句子的语法更加准确。

最后，调整了一下文章内容，单独起一行再次询问 Tom 能否参加，并期待得到回复。