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YesterdayliMingandItookapartinanoutdoorcampingactivity,Wegotupasearlieraspossiblebutp... Yesterday li Ming and I took a part in an outdoor camping activity, We got up as earlier as possible but put on strong and comfortable shoes. Then they headed for a hill with some food in the bags. When reaching the top, we saw a direction mark, that told us the position of the campsite. Down the hill. we come to a river but didnt know how to cross it. Suddenly I came up an idea. We ut our bags on a board and swam in the water push the board. After getting to the other ba"ks, we alkerl for half an hour unless we arrived at the destination. We spent the night there 展开
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Yesterday li Ming and I took a part in an outdoor camping activity.We got up as early as possible and put on strong and comfortable shoes.Then we headed for a hill with some foods in the bags.When we reached the top, we saw a direction mark, which told us the position of the campsite.Downed the hill,we came to a river but didnt know how to cross it.Suddenly I came up an idea. We put our bags on a board and swam in the water and pushed the board.After got to the another bank, we walked for half an hour finally we arrived at the destination. We stayed the night there.
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1.earlier 改成early
2.but改成 and
3.that改成which
4.come改成came
5.came up 后加上with
6.push改成pushing
后面两排字有许多错误,先把它写完整,再帮你改。
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第一行:early
二 :but改成and
:they we
that which
come came
came up 后边加with
push pushing
ba’‘ks?不知道是什么
unless 改成until
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earlier-------early;but------------and;they--------we;come--------came;came up-------------came up with;up-------put;push--------pushing;ba"ks-------------?;alkerl for-----------took;unless------until,,,,,
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是几年级的?六年级的,如果不是,那我就帮不了了恕我直言,请原谅,
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