Question

英语短文改错

Yesterday li Ming and I took a part in an outdoor camping activity, We got up as earlier as possible but put on strong and comfortable shoes. Then they headed for a hill with some food in the bags. When reaching the top, we saw a direction mark, that told us the position of the campsite. Down the hill. we come to a river but didnt know how to cross it. Suddenly I came up an idea. We ut our bags on a board and swam in the water push the board. After getting to the other ba"ks, we alkerl for half an hour unless we arrived at the destination. We spent the night there

Answer 1

Yesterday li Ming and I took ①【a去掉】 part in an outdoor camping activity, We got up as ②【earlier 改为early】as possible ③【but改为and】 put on strong and comfortable shoes. Then ④【they 改为we】headed for a hill with some food in the bags. ⑤【When去掉，或改为On/Upon】reaching the top, we saw a direction mark, ⑥【that改为which】 told us the position of the campsite. Down the hill. we ⑦【come不知道这个是你打错了还是原文就是这样，反正应该是came】 to a river but didnt know how to cross it. Suddenly I came up ⑧【加上with】an idea. We ut our bags on a board and swam in the water ⑨【push改为pushing】 the board. After getting to the other ⑩【ba"ks改为bank】, we alkerl for half an hour (11)【unless 改为until】we arrived at the destination. We spent the night there.你打字错了不少，有些明显的就没当错来改，可⑦不明确，所以一共是十一个，如果⑦原文是came,是你打错了，那么⑤就是错的。

Answer 2

1、第一行：took a part in，删除a。2、第一行 as earlier as 改为early 3、第二行but put on改为and put on。4、第二行Then they headed for 改为Then we headed for 。5、第二行a hill 改为the hill 6、第三行 that told us 改为which told us 。7、第四行we come to 改为came to。8、第四行 I came up 改为 I came up with 9、第五行 push the board改为pushing 10、 第六行unless改为until

Answer 3

Yesterday Li Ming and I took a part in an outdoor camping activity, We got up as early as possible and put on strong and comfortable shoes. Then they headed for a hill with some food in the bags. When reaching the top, we saw a direction mark, which told us the position of the campsite. Down the hill. we came to a river but didn’t know how to cross it. Suddenly I came up with an idea. We put our bags on a board and swam in the water pushing the board. After getting to the other bank, we walked for half an hour until we arrived at the destination. We spent the night there.
其中有些错误可能是楼主上传时的笔误吧。改好了，您看一下，是否满意？呵呵

Answer 4

第一行：earlier改为early (as...as...只能使用原级）
第二行：but改为and(but表示转折，and表示承接/并列）、
第三行：that改为which
第四行：come改为came
第五行：push改为pushing
第六行：unless改为until

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Answer 5

Yesterday li Ming and I took * part in an outdoor camping activity, We got up as **early as possible ***and put on strong and comfortable shoes. Then ****we headed for a hill with some food in the bags. When reaching the top, we saw a direction mark, *****which told us the position of the campsite. Down the hill. we ******came to a river but didnt know how to cross it. Suddenly I came up an idea. We ******put our bags on a board and swam in the water ********pushing the board. After getting to the other ba"ks, we ******spent for half an hour ********until we arrived at the destination. We spent the night there.

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