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简单英文翻译

ClopinTrouillefou等人营救Esmeralda
当Clopin Trouillefou得知这Esmeralda藏身于圣母院这个消息后，随即率领成千上万的人前来营救Esmeralda！而不明真相的Quasimodo为了保护心爱的Esmeralda，他不惜一切从楼顶上仍下巨大的石条石块，翻倒灼热的液体，企图阻止他们进入教堂，而Clopin Trouillefou等人为救Esmeralda亦不惜一切与Quasimodo大战，他们这种情神十分今人感动！最终，Clopin Trouillefou等人终于攻破大门，救走了Esmeralda，但不料士兵早已包围他们，雨点般的箭刺向Clopin Trouillefou等人和Esmeralda，而Clopin Trouillefou和Esmeralda也在混战中被人杀死，这是多么残酷的现实。
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Answer 1

ClopinTrouillefou and His Men Rescued Esmeralda
When Clopin Trouillefou got the information that Esmeralda was hidden in Notre Dame Cathedral, he led at once thousands of people to rescue her! However, Ouasimodo unknowingly, for sake of protecting his beloved Esmeralda, went all out to threw huge stones from the building's top, and overturn searing liquid down, attempting to stop them outside the church; on other hand, Clopin Trouillefou and his men were also trying their utmost for Esmeralda in fought with Quasimodo,with such striking boldness! Finally,Clopin Trouillefou and his men broke through the gate and rescued Esmeralda, but they found themselves besieged by soldiers, and arrows like rain flied to Clopin Trouillefou and his men with Esmeralda. What a cruel fact is that, Clopin Trouillefou together with Esmeralda was shot dead in the chaos!

备注：
unknowingly不知真相，不知情地
beloved心爱的
on the other hand同时，另一方面
striking令人动容的，也可能换成moving, touching
最后一句中的was在语法上不能改成were.
相信我这是最地道的英语翻译了！

Answer 2

When Clopin Trouillefou receives the news that Esmeralda hides herself in the Notre Dame Cathedral, he immediately rounds all of the Traunds to rescue Esmeralda. To protect his lover Esmeralda, Quasimodo mistakenly regards the rescue as assault that he retaliates with stones, timer and molten lead, attempting to keep them outside the Cathedral. However, Clopin Trouillefou leads a heavy attack at all the expenses to save Esmeralda, which is really impressive. Finally, Clopin Trouillefou succeeds in rescuing Esmeralda, but unfortunately is caught in a siege by the King's guards. Clopin and Esmeralda are shot with spattered arrows, then die in the turmoil. What a cruel result.

Answer 3

When the Clopin Trouillefou Esmeralda ClopinTrouillefou rescue others that this Esmeralda is hiding in Notre Dame this news, immediately led tens of thousands of people come to the rescue of Esmeralda! But unknown to the Quasimodo in order to protect the beloved Esmeralda, he did everything from the top of the building is still under the stone of huge stones, overturned the hot fluid, in an attempt to stop them from entering the church, while the Clopin Trouillefou people to save Esmeralda at all with the Quasimodo war, he had this very modern moved by god! Finally, Clopin Trouillefou et al. Finally broke the door, rescued Esmeralda, but when the soldiers had surrounded them, a rain of arrows to stab Clopin Trouillefou et al and Esmeralda, while Clopin Trouillefou and Esmeralda in the scuffle was killed, this is how the cruel reality.

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