Question

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71. After climbing a great hill, one only finds there aremore many hills to climb.
72. A pound should be left to find its own levelagainst the other European currencies.
73. We look forward to your order as well ascontinueto serve your needs.
74. The book that you seelaying on the table belongsto the teacher.
75. Nora hardly never misses an opportunity to practicespeaking Chinese.
76. 58 percent of people were asked thought that theadvertising of tobacco
and alcohol should bebanned.
77. It is better to be guessing the meanings of unknown wordsfrom their
context rather than
looking every word up in the dictionary.
78. The best interview is one in that there is two-waycommunication between
the employer and the jobapplicant.
79. Did you ever stop a moment to ask whether welearn English to use it or
do we use English tolearn it?
80. The position of the words in a sentence is the principalmeans of showing its relationship.
81. The action of market forces means that the cost of somethingrises if
demand for it rises and theamount available remain constant.
82. The head of my department is quite friendly, though Iimagine he could be
little friendly in adifficult situation.
83. They are going to leave fortheUnited Statesnext week, and so do we.
84. Life is a lot simpler when what we honoredwas father and mother rather
than allmajor credit cards.
85. The United
States is composed of fifty states,
two of that are separated from the
others by land or water.

Answer 1

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71. After climbing a great hill, one only finds there are (more many改成many more 或 直接去掉many) hills to climb.
没有more many搭配
72. A pound should be left to find its own level against (去掉the) other European currencies.
后面有限定词European，the就是多余的了
73. We look forward to your order as well as (continue改成continuing) to serve your needs.
look forward to中的to是介词，其后加名词your order或动名词doing sth
74. The book that you see (laying改成lying) on the table belongs to the teacher.
“躺，位于”的动词lie的现在分词是lying
75. Nora hardly (never改成ever) misses an opportunity to practice speaking Chinese.
hardly ever是固定短语，意思是：很少，几乎不。
76. 58 percent of people (去掉were) asked thought that the advertising of tobacco
and alcohol should be banned.
主句动词是thought，asked为后置定语修饰people，were asked不能做后置定语
77. It is better to be guessing the meanings of unknown words from their
context rather than (加上be) looking every word up in the dictionary.
不定式to后面的be不能省略
78. The best interview is one in (that改成which) there is two-waycommunication between
the employer and the jobapplicant.
介词之后的关系代词不能用that
79. Did you ever stop a moment to ask whether we learn English to use it or
(去掉do) we use English to learn it?
宾语从句必须使用陈述句序
80. The position of the words in a sentence is the principal means of showing (its改成their relationship.
their对应前文中的the words
81. The action of market forces means that the cost of something rises if
demand for it rises and the amount available (remain改成remains) constant.
主语the amount为第三人称单数形式，动词remain也必须用单数形式
82. The head of my department is quite friendly, though I imagine he could be
(little改成less) friendly in a difficult situation.
句意为比较，用比较级less
83. They are going to leave for theUnited States next week, and so (do改成are) we.
对应前句的are going to
84. Life (is改成was) a lot simpler when what we honored was father and mother rather
than all major credit cards.
主从句的时态要对应
85. The United States is composed of fifty states, two of (that改成which) are separated from the others by land or water.
that不能用作非限制性定语从句中的关系词

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Answer 2

71. 删掉many
72 没看懂
73 continue----continuing
74 see---saw
75 hardly 和 never 留一个，practice her/his spoken chinese
76 people 后加who
77 be guessing---guess
78 one in that there is ----what invovles a
79 stop a moment -----stop for a moment ,删掉do we use
80 没看懂
81 没看懂
82 The head of my department ------my immediate boss ,后半句没看懂
83 going to leave ----leaving，and 删掉
84 没看懂
85 that--them, water-ocean