Question

I'd rather you come along with me,I am afaid I can't persuade him to do it without your presence.

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Answer 1

come 改成 came
afraid 少写了r

I'd rather you came along with me,I am afraid I can't persuade him to do it without your presence.
我宁愿你跟我一起来,我怕你不在我没办法说服他去做(某件事)

would rather sb did (对现在或将来的虚拟)
例如
I’d rather you were happy. 我愿你快乐。
I’d rather she sat next to me. 我宁愿她挨着我坐。

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Answer 2

afraid 后面+ that么 这个that 不能省略吧