Question

求一篇《my favourite place in school》的初三英语作文，要很真实，最好感动死中考批卷老师，让她们哭死

Answer 1

MY FAVOURITE PLACE（我最爱的地方）

I am a girl. I saw a lot of places. But my favourite place is Xian.

Xian is a beautiful city. There are lots of places in Xian. The most famous place is the terra-cotta warriors.

The terracotta warriors are in the east of Xian. I went to Xian with my mother and my friends in the summer holiday. We went by car to Xian. The terra-cotta warriors have got four places.

Many people visited the Terra Cotta Warriors. They were from different country. There are English、American、Japanese、Russian…We were very happy and we talked very friendly.

In The terra-cotta warriors, There are so many horses and men with mud. Some people smile; Some people don’t smile; Some people sit; Some people stand. Their hair is very long. Terra Cotta Warriors are very great ！

In The terra-cotta warriors, I saw an old grandma. She looks very friendly .I said to her :“Hello! Welcome to China! Welcome to Xian! Excuse me, please! Would you like take a picture with me?”She said:“Ok！Of course !” I talked with her and play with her .The grandma from England. I said:“I’m from Luoyang. Welcome to Luoyang ! My English is very poor!” But the grandma said to me with smile:“No! Your English is very good! Luoyang is a beautiful city. I love Luoyang, too.” We talked very happy. I talked with lots of English and American. I took many pictures with them.Xian is a beautiful bridge between us.

I love Xian. I love the terra-cotta warriors. It’s my favourite place. It’s really worth seeing.

翻译：
我最喜爱的地方

我是一个女孩儿，我去过许多地方，看过许多美景。但是，我最喜欢的地方还是西安。
西安是一个美丽的城市，有许多景点。其中最著名的要数兵马俑了。
兵马俑在西安的东部。在暑假里，我和妈妈还有朋友们一起乘坐汽车去西安。兵马俑分为四个景点。有许多人都来参观兵马俑。他们来自不同的国家，有英国人、美国人、日本人、俄罗斯人……我们很高兴，并且友好地交谈。
在兵马俑里，有那么多的用泥土做成的人和马。有的人微笑着，有的人不笑，有的人站着，有的人坐着。他们的头发都很长。这些兵马俑真伟大！
在兵马俑里，我看见了一位老奶奶。她看起来十分和蔼。我对她说：“您好！欢迎来到中国！欢迎您来到西安！打扰一下，请问，我可以和您一起合张影吗？”她很愉快地说：“当然，没问题！”我和她聊天还和她一起玩。这位老奶奶来自英国。我说：“我来自洛阳，欢迎您去洛阳玩。我的英语很不好呢。”
可是老奶奶笑着说：“不，你的英语很棒哦！洛阳是一个美丽的城市，我也爱洛阳。”我们交谈真愉快。我和许多英国人和美国人用英语交流。我还和他们合影留念。西安真像一座美丽的桥梁架在我们之间。
我爱西安，我爱兵马俑。它是我最爱的景点，那真是个值得一去的地方。

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Answer 2

My favourite place in school is the fantastic library which
I borrow books.

I go there three times a week.

Many students go to library at noon, but it is very
quiet.

Most of the student go there for using computer, while
others prefer to reading like me.

I love reading, and I really enjoy it.

It is a part of my life.

Romance and horror are my best-loved.

Now, I am trying to read a book--Bright to Terabithia, in
English.

That is a wonderful story --the heroine Leslie's death is
sudden, and I cried when Jess,the hero in the book,knew she died.