Question

~帮我写篇英语作文

生活中总会有不愉快的事，假如你（John）因为一点小事与你最好的朋友张明在一次踢球中发生了争执，事后你觉得很后悔，又不知道如何在和张明成为朋友，你就 这件事给你的好朋友玛丽（Mary）写信。向她寻求解决方法。参考词汇：upset ,get on well with,have a fight ,regretful(后悔的),forgive(原谅)

Answer 1

Dear Mary,
Hello.This is John.I am writing to ask for your help.The other day I had a fight with Zhang Ming ,who was my best friend, in a football match.I called his names。Only this moment did I realize that I had done something wrong. It was all my fault.I shouldn't have called his names.I am very regretful for the time being .I am very upset too,I really don't know how to make up my fault and be his friend again.Mary,what should I do?Do you think I will get on well with him again?Please give me some advice.Thank you.
Regards
Yours
John

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好像不对吧。。。翻译出来是这样的~
亲爱的玛丽，我是约翰。我想请求你的帮助。我那天跟张明打架，他是我最好的朋友，在一场足球比赛。我叫他的名字。这时我才意识到，这都是我的错。我很遗憾。我很难过过，我真的不知道怎样来弥补我的过错并再次成为他的朋友。玛丽，我应该怎么做？你认为我会跟他相处得好吗？请给我一些建议。谢谢你。把你的约翰
“ 我叫他的名字"，叫他名字干嘛，是发生了争执~

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没错的。不要用网上翻译

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I called his names 这句能否换换

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I called his names是我骂了他的意思啊。不是“我叫他的名字”，我叫他的名字是I called his name.没有s的

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但是这里面很多单词我们都还没学~

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Dear Mary,
Hello.This is John.I am writing to ask for your help.Last weekend I had a fight with Zhang Ming when we were playing football together.I did something wrong..I am very regretful now .I am very upset too,I really don't know how to make up my fault.I want to be his good friend again.Mary,what should I do?Do you think I will get on well with him again?Please give me some advice.Thank you.

Answer 2

我以为谁呢。。
怎么和我们班作文一样。。
给我自己写去。。

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同一个学校同一个老师能不一样么~

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去去去 自己写！！！

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我要是想自己写我上这干嘛，吃饱了撑的 啊

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T^T 尊师重道要懂得啊！！！

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写你的作文去，来这瞎凑热闹干嘛