Question

亲，帮我改一下英语作文吧！

题目：假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖，校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验，根据以下提示写一篇短文。 1参加英语角的益处；2坚持写英文日记的作用；3英语阅读网站（Enjoy Reading）对你的帮助。 注意，1词数120~150；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
作文 How to Learn English Well
I‘m very happy to share my experience of learning English here .I hope they are useful to you.
Learning a language ,a good environment is important . For the reason ,joining in a English corner is a goog way to improve spoken English and listening English.Besides this ,keeping on writing English diaries is a good idea. If you like suring on the Internet ,Enjoy Reading ,a website which is about English reading is a good place to improve reading . Of course , listening English songs ,writing English articles,listening to English radios are good ways to learn English as well.
In short ,you can always find a way which suits yourself.But I must tell you,the most point is persistence .As Mr Li Yang said :"Nothing can take the place of pesistence in the world !" It's true .Without persistence ,you can do nothing.So ,just try !

Answer 1

你好，写得相当不错，我只是稍加修改了一下，括号内的是修改的或增加的内容。祝你成功，加油！

How to Learn English Well
Hello I am Li Hua and your schoolmate. I‘m very happy to share my experience(s 用复数，同后面的I hope they are...相对应) of learning English here .I hope they are useful to you.
Learning a language ,a good environment is important . For the reason ,joining in a(用an，Ehglish是元音开头的）English corner is a goog way to improve spoken English and listening English.Besides this ,keeping on writing English diaries（改为writing diary in English) is a good idea. If you like suring(surfing 单词拼错了）on the Internet ,Enjoy Reading ,a website which is about English reading is a good place to improve reading . Of course , listening English songs ,writing English articles,listening to English radios are good ways to learn English as well.
In short ,you can always find a way which suits yourself.But I must tell you,the most （important) point is persistence .As Mr Li Yang said :"Nothing can take the place of pesistence in the world !" It's true .Without persistence ,you can do nothing.So ,just try ! (You will benefit from it.)

Answer 2

亲，个人认为，你还是需要修炼的哦~
How to Learn English Well
Hello,everyone! This is Li Hua, who has won the first prize in the recent English Contest recently. It is such a great honour for me to share with you my own approach to studying English. Sincerely, I wish it will be of some benefit to you!
On the whole, I would like to owe my success to the following aspects, which include participating in the English Corner, the habit of keeping a diary every day, and absolutely, browsing websites like Enjoy Reading. First and foremost, a good atmosphere is significant, within which we will hear English spokem frequently. English Corner provides us with just the very chance in our studies concerning English! What is more, keeping a diary enables us to polish up our skills in writing. By writing every day, you are able to keep a good sense in English! Last but not leat, it is necessary for us to combine up-to-date technologies in our studies, like surfing the Enjoy Reading, on which you can read all kinds of news and articles.
As far as I am concerned, perseverance is what is badly needed in language studies, English being no exceptional. Whatever the measure, when lacking it, will prove void. Just as the saying goes, no pains, no gains! Only when you keep doing your utmost can you succeed in English!

祝你好运O(∩_∩)O~

Answer 3

建议corner改成club；spoken english 改为the English level;idea 改成habbit；suring拼错了，改为surfing；the most point 改为the most important thing

Answer 4

• Hello! My name is Li Hua .I come from Xinhua Secondary School. I’m very happy to share my experience of English learning with you. I hope it is useful.    

•    Learning a language, a good environment is very important.For this reason, joining in an English corner is a good way to improve listening and speaking. Besides this, keeping on writing English diaries is a good way..

     If you like surfing on the Interne , Enjoy Reading ,a website which is about English reading is a good place to improve reading . Of course, listening to English songs , writing English articles and listening to English radio programs are good ways to learn English as well.

Answer 5

Hello! My name is Li Hua from Xinhua Secondary School. I’m very happy to share my experience of English learning with you. I hope it is useful.

When learning a language, a good environment is important. For this reason, joining in an English corner is a good way to improve listening and speaking. Besides this, keeping on writing English diaries is a good idea. If you like surfing on the Interne , Enjoy Reading ,a website which is about English reading is a good place to improve reading . Of course, listening to English songs , writing English articles and listening to English radio programs are good ways to learn English as well.

In short, you can always find a way which suits yourself. But I must tell you, the key point is persistence. As Mr. Li Yang once said, "Nothing can take the place of persistence in the world !" It's true. Without persistence, you can do nothing. So, just try !