Question

这个两个回答哪个正确，请教英语高手！

[1]在追求人生理想、人生目标中所会遇到种种问题与阻碍
Various problems & obstacles that will be encountered while pursuing a life ideal & life object
[2]人生不需要有理想么？
doesn't life need a ideal?
[3]理想与现实之间有矛盾存在么？
are there any contradictions between ideal and reality?
[4]理想与现实之间的矛盾是必然的
the contradictions between ideal and reality is inevitable
[5]理想主义与现实主义是相互存在并依存的
idealism and realism are supplement each other
[6]面对矛盾与挫折，只要我们勇于去面对，成功就会离你越近。
facing contradictions & frustrations, as long as we treat bravely, the success will get closer to you
[7]对于当代大学生树立正确人生观、价值观等问题的总结
the conclusion of the contemporary college students establishing correct life philosophy and values, etc.
[8]对于作者对人物性格刻画的分析和对全文内容的理解，并提出相关问题
to the author's analysis of character's personality depiction and understanding for the full text, and rise relevant issues.
[9]当代大学生所面对的错误人生观、价值观的问题
issues about the wrong life philosophy and values that contemporary college students faced

回答者：大脑袋小眼睛 - 经理 五级 5-9 10:45

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(1)In the process of chasing life ideal and aim,it is always accompanied with variety of problems and encumbrances...
在追求人生理想、人生目标中所会遇到种种问题与阻碍

(2)Doesn't life need ideals???
人生不需要有理想么？

(3)Is there any conflicts between ideal and reality?
理想与现实之间有矛盾存在么？

(4)The conflicts between ideal and reality are inevitable....
理想与现实之间的矛盾是必然的

(5)Idealism and realism are interdependent..
理想主义与现实主义是相互存在并依存的

(6)While facing contradiction and setback,as long as we dare to face, the success will leave you closer..
面对矛盾与挫折，只要我们勇于去面对，成功就会离你越近

(7)A sum-up for problems of college students should build up a correct philosophy and values...
对于当代大学生树立正确人生观、价值观等问题的总结

(8)After analyzing the personalities' description of the characters by author and understanding the whole text, please raise some correlative questions...
对于作者对人物性格刻画的分析和对全文内容的理解，并提出相关问题

(9)College students of the time are facing a problem of possess of uncorrect philosphy and values...
当代大学生所面对的错误人生观、价值观的问题

回答者：scorpiobbx - 千总 五级 5-9 14:42

Answer 1

坦白说问题挺多的，语法、句子结构、英语习惯上都有问题。两个人差不多,都有错的地方和精彩的地方，第一个人翻译得有点拗口，第二个人喜欢把没有谓语的短语翻译成完整的句子，个人觉得不太妥当。还有我觉得第七句这样翻译比较好：

7.对于当代大学生树立正确人生观、价值观等问题的总结
The conclusion of nowaday undergraduates' problems on forming correct views on life, values, etc.

主要内容是“当代大学生问题的总结”,至于什么问题呢？ “树立正确的人生观、价值观等”。我觉得用介词短语比较一目了然，也符合英语习惯。就如：Congratulations on graduating with high honors from such a prestigious university.

6.面对矛盾与挫折，只要我们勇于去面对，成功就会离你越近。
In face of uncertainties and frustration, the braver we are, the closer success is.
用the more...the more的句型强调“越……越……”。另外，也用了介词短语。还有face的用法问题，如果做动词是sth. face sb.,不是sb. face sth.

5.理想主义与现实主义是相互存在并依存的
Idealism and realism are co-existent and co-dependent.
依存就是相互依赖的意思，不能只翻译相互存在而漏掉后面的形容词，这样的翻译是不准确、不合格的！

毛病都说的话，要写大概10000字，就到这里吧！算我做件好事。另外，第八句的中文意思实在看不懂，不知道那个“并”是什么意思！！！

yoyossss

Answer 2

当然是第一个回答者

Answer 3

第二个翻译的好，头一位的英语水平一般，很多地方都有问题，要么翻错了像第8句，要么看着像对但英国人不这么用词句，像第四句，要么就是句子不顺畅，多了，好几句读着都不顺，这哥们语感一般，第二位的英语比较强，反正是比我强，不敢乱挑错，呵呵

Answer 4

有好有坏,所以提供我的翻译,肯定比他们好,嘿嘿~
(1)During the process of chasing life-long dreams and goals, there are always various kinds of problems and obstacles.
在追求人生理想、人生目标中所会遇到种种问题与阻碍

(2) Doesn't life need ideality?
人生不需要有理想么？

(3)Is there any conflict between the virtual world and the reality?
理想与现实之间有矛盾存在么？

(4)It's inevitable that there are contradictions between the virtual and real world.
理想与现实之间的矛盾是必然的

(5)Both idealism and realism exsist, and they denpend on each other.
理想主义与现实主义是相互存在并依存的

(6)In the face of conflicts and troubles, as long as you can face up to them, success will be closer and closer.
面对矛盾与挫折，只要我们勇于去面对，成功就会离你越近 (这个句子本身就有一点问题，主语是“我们”还是“你”)

(7)A summary of problems about college students building up a right attitude towards life and values...
对于当代大学生树立正确人生观、价值观等问题的总结

(8)After analyzing the author's descriptions of the characters' personalities and understanding the whole content, please put forward some correlative questions.
对于作者对人物性格刻画的分析和对全文内容的理解，并提出相关问题

(9)College students are facing with the problem caued by wrong philosphy and sense of values.
当代大学生所面对的错误人生观、价值观的问题

Answer 5

of problems and obstacles.
人生目标中所会遇到种种问题与阻碍

(2) Doesn't life need ideality?
人生不需要有理想么

(3)Is there any conflict between the virtual world and the reality?
理想与现实之间有矛盾存在么？

(4)It's inevitable that there are contradictions between the virtual and real world.
理想与现实之间的矛盾是必然的

(5)Both idealism and realism exsist, and they denpend on each other.
理想主义与现实主义是相互存在并依存的

(6)In the face of conflicts and troubles, as long as you can face up to them, success will be closer and closer.
面对矛盾与挫折，只要我们勇于去面对，成功就会离你越近 (这个句子本身就有一点问题，主语是“我们”还是“你”)

(7)A summary of problems about college students building up a right attitude towards life and values...
对于当代大学生树立正确人生观、价值观等问题的总结

(8)After analyzing the author's descriptions of the characters' personalities and understanding the whole content, please put forward some correlative questions.
对于作者对人物性格刻画的分析和对全文内容的理解，并提出相关问题

(9)College students are facing with the problem caued by wrong philosphy and sense of values.
当代大学生所面对的错误人生观、价值观的问题

Answer 6

第二个：1、应是a variety of …,这是基本句型。
3、Are there any conflicts between ideal and reality? 既然conflict 用复数，那就表明冲突有时可作可数名词。遵循主谓一致原则。
6、前半句应是While we are facing contradiction and setback.首先
as long as we dare to face这只是一个插入语。分析句子时不用看这一句。那麽看剩下的。如果前半句没有we are，句子的逻辑主语就是the success,翻出来就是当成功面对矛盾和挫折，它会离你越近。意思明显不对。
7、总结不是sum-up,这是动词，这里要用的是名词。其次，of后不跟句子。我是这样写的：A conclusion of the problems which about colledge students should build up a correct philosophy and values
9、The problems of incorrect philosphy and values which are faced by colledge students in present time. 没有uncorrect这一说，correct的反义是incorrect.
其它的句子我觉得是正确的。