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Father often brought me to the City Arts Museum to enjoy traditional Chinese painting when I was young.Under influence of Father,I began to love this form of art.I still remember when I firstly painted using ink and a brush at ten. Use a brush was not easy at all. I got either too much ink or too few.The lines I did was sometimes too thin, sometimes too thick. When the brush took in too much ink, I don't know what to do with it. In the end the flower what I painted looked like a wheel. However, I still found this interesting to paint.
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Answer 1

Father often brought【brought --> took】 me to the City Arts Museum to enjoy traditional Chinese painting 【painting --> paintings】when I was young.Under【加the】 influence of Father,I began to love this form of art.I still remember when I firstly【firstly --> first】 painted using ink and a brush at ten. Use 【Use -- > Using】a brush was not easy at all. I got either too much ink or too few【few -- > little】.The lines I did was 【was --> were】sometimes too thin, sometimes too thick. When the brush took in too much ink, I don't 【don't --> didn't】know what to do with it. In the end the flower what【把what 改成that / which 或去掉 what】 I painted looked like a wheel. However, I still found this 【this -- >it】interesting to paint.

Answer 2

(My) father often (took) me to the City Arts Museum to enjoy traditional Chinese painting when I was young.

Under (the) influence of (my) father, I began to love this form of art. I still remember when I (first) painted using ink and a brush at ten.

（Using） a brush was not easy at all. I got either too much ink or too (little). The lines I did (were) sometimes too thin, sometimes too thick. When the brush took in too much ink, I (didn’t) know what to do with it. In the end the flower (that) I painted looked like a wheel. However, I still found (it ) interesting to paint.