Question

求翻译，软件翻译不要，指出单词错误，语法错误加分

Mr . Jones woke early one morning , before the sun had risen . It was a beautiful morning , So he went to the window and looked out . He was surprised to see a neatly-dressed and mid-aged professor , who lived in the university just up the road from Mr. Jones ’house ,coming the direction of the town . He had grey hair and thick glasses , and was carrying an umbrella , a morning newspaper and a bag . Mr . Jones thought that he must have arrived by the night train instead of taking a taxi.
Mr. Jones had a big tree in his garden , and the children had tied a long rope to one of the branches, so that they could swing on it.
Mr. Jones saw the professor stop when he saw the rope and looked carefully up and down the road . When he saw that there was nobody in sight , he stepped into the garden (there was no fence), put his umbrella , newspaper , bag and hat neatly on the grass and grasped the rope . He pulled it hard to see whether it was strong enough to take his weight , then ran as fast as he could and swung into the air on the end of the rope , his grey hair blowing all around his face . Backwards and forwards he swung , sometimes taking a few more running steps on the grass when the rope began to swing too slowly for him.
At last the professor stopped , straightened his tie , combed his hair carefully , put on his hat, picked up his umbrella , newspaper and bag , and continued on his way to the university, looking as quiet and correct and respectable as one would expect a professor to be.

Answer 1

乔纳斯先生早上醒得很早，总是在日出以前。那是一个美丽的早晨。他走到窗户边看外面的景色。他很意外的看到，一位住在他家前面一条街道大学里，衣着整洁的中年教授正在从镇子的方向走来，教授拿着伞，一份晨报，一个包。乔纳斯先生想教授一定是乘坐了夜间火车而不是出租车到这里的。
乔纳斯先生的院子里有一棵大树，孩子们在树枝上钓上了绳子，这样他们就可以荡秋千。
乔纳斯先生看到教授在秋千绳处停了下来，然后小心地环顾了街道。教授看到周围没有人，就跨进了院子（没有栅栏），把伞，报纸和包放在草地上，抓住秋千绳。他用力扯秋千绳以便确认是否能承受他的体重，然后以最快的速度助跑，在绳子的一端荡起来，他灰白色的头发吹乱在脸的周围。向前向后，当绳子荡得慢下来，不时地他又助跑几下。
最后教授停了下来，系好领带，仔细地梳理好头发，带上帽子，拿起伞报纸和包，继续向大学的走去，他看起来正如一个大学教授那样安静，正直，令人尊敬。
全部自己翻译的
好可爱的老教授~
修改的地方用括号标出来了
Mr . Jones woke early one morning , before the sun （rose） . It was a beautiful morning , So he went to the window and looked out . He was surprised to see a neatly-dressed and mid-aged professor , who lived in the university just up the road from Mr. Jones ’house ,coming (from) the direction of the town . He had grey hair and thick glasses , and was carrying an umbrella , a morning newspaper and a bag . Mr . Jones thought that he must have arrived by the night train instead of taking a taxi.
Mr. Jones had a big tree in his garden , and the children （have） tied a long rope to one of the branches, so that they could swing on it.
Mr. Jones saw the professor stop when he saw the rope and looked carefully up and down the road . When he saw that there was nobody in sight , he stepped into the garden (there was no fence), put his umbrella , newspaper , bag and hat neatly on the grass and grasped the rope . He pulled it hard to see whether it was strong enough to take his weight , then ran as fast as he could and swung into the air on the end of the rope , his grey hair (was)blowing all around his face . Backwards and forwards he swung , sometimes (took) a few more running steps on the grass when the rope began to swing too slowly for him.
At last the professor stopped , straightened his tie , combed his hair carefully , put on his hat, picked up his umbrella , newspaper and bag , and continued on his way to the university, (looked) as quiet and correct and respectable as one would expect a professor to be.