Question

我最近准备申请去英国的旅行签证！给签证官写了一封信，不长。哪位英语高人能帮帮我！谢谢！

亲爱的先生/女士：
您好，感谢您在百忙之中阅读我的来信。我叫XXX，是一个在韩国首尔读大学的中国留学生。希望这封信能对我顺利取得赴英旅游签证有帮助，可以早日踏上那片美丽的土地。
我喜爱旅游，在上学期间我喜欢利用假期时间到处走走看看，几乎走遍了中国的名川大山,其间还跟随旅行团去过日本。在韩国的几年留学时光也让我对亚洲文化有了更深刻的认识和学习。而英国多年丰富的人文历史一直吸引着我，如今我想趁着大学里的最后一个暑假，去英国自助旅行，去感受那里的美好风光，体验那里的文化。
我的决定得到了父母和朋友的支持。我的父母在中国国内为我准备材料，并从国内寄到韩国，同时支付我整个旅程的费用。而我在英国读大学的中国朋友愿意为我提供住宿。
在旅行结束后，我会回到韩国，完成我最后一个学期的学习。在拿到学位之后回到我的家乡——中国四川。我的专业是新闻放送，我的梦想是做一名诚实优秀的媒体人。我相信这次的旅行经历对我未来的求职，我梦想的实现，有着很大的意义。
再次感谢您抽出宝贵的时间阅读这封信件，祝您工作顺利，身体健康。
请问有没有英语高人帮我翻译，太着急了没有说清楚问题不好意思啊TAT

Answer 1

而我在英国读大学的中国朋友愿意为我提供住宿。不建议体现这个内容。碰到钻牛角尖的签证官会觉得你这是去访友，让你多提供你朋友在英国的信息的。比方邀请函啊，他的护照和签证信息啊之类的。既然你申请的旅行就完全按照旅行的说法来就好了。

Answer 2

Dear Sir / Madam:
Hello, Thank you for reading my letter during your busy schedule. My name is XXX, I am a Chinese students studying in a university in Seoul, Korea. I hope this letter will help me get my UK tourist visa approved, so I can set foot on that beautiful land as soon as possible.
I love to travel, I like to use the my vacation time to travel. I have traveled almost all of China's famous places, I have also traveled with a tour group to Japan. My years studying in Korean college led me with a deeper understanding of Asian culture. I have also always been attracted to the rich cultural history of England, so with my last college summer vacation, I would like to travel to England to experience the beautiful scenery, and alluring culture.
My decision to travel to England is supported by my parents and friends. My parents helped me prepared materials and sent to South Korea from China, they will also provide me with financial support and cover the cost of my entire trip. My friend whom I met in college will provide me with place to stay while I visit England.
After the end of the trip, I will return to Korea, to complete my last semester of college. After graduation I will return to my homeland - Sichuan, China. My major is professional journalism, my dream is to become a professional journalist. I believe this trip to England will help me greatly with my dream of a career in the field of journalism.
Once again, thank you for taking time out to reading this letter, I wish you every success in your work, and life.

Answer 3

Dear Sir/Madam,

Glad to write to you. My name is XXX, a Chinese student studying at Seoul National Uinversity in South Korea. I do hope this letter could help you assess my application for a tourist visa to the UK, a beautiful country.

Answer 4

不懂~~

Answer 5

我可以帮你翻译！