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会英文的帮帮忙 请帮我把以下句子中翻英~ 禁止翻译软体 拜托 可再加分

请帮我把以下几的句子中翻英 然後帮我看看修改我的文章 帮我弄成有符合连接到题目的文章 　若有需要的话 也可以帮我补充句句子 可再加分

我想要strong一点的 thesis statement
高手请帮我修改一下文章 谢谢喔
我看得出来是不是翻译软体翻的 所以用翻译软体的 别浪费时间了

d. How does Sartre define "anguish"? What is the significance of "anguish" in his essay "Existentialism" (mix 400 words)

我认为从存在主义的观点来定义，我们的生活就是我们做出的选择。当我们来到世上，产生意义时，接受每一个选择就成了令我们不安的责任。这个责任使我们极度痛苦

According to Sartre, anguish is the realization that there is no necessity in his life. His life is a system of values sustained in being only by his choice of sustaining it. He is the one who give values to everything around himself in order to determine his reaction to those things. Once he has the consciousness of his freedom, he will have the sensation of groundlessness and experience the anguish of being the source of his own values. Then Sartre further explains most people flee anguish in bad faith. Bad faith is a form of self-deception, trying to tell lies to himself. <anguish is evident even when it conceals itself> (p213)

Sartre's existentialism is a philosophy, which deals with man. It states that man is that which he makes of himself and that he has to make his own choices in a state of anguish. Man chooses in anguish, because he has no external guidelines to help him and must rely on his own morals and beliefs. Man chooses completely want he wants to do. His existence depends on this. And this is where I believe Sartre locates the meaning to mans' existence. According to Sartre mans' existence only takes on meaning through his actions. The Sartrian existentialist finds it extremely troubling that God does not exist because with Him vanishes all hope of finding values in an intelligible heaven. As Dostoevsky once said, If God did not exist, then everything would be permitted.(pg 22) Sartre claims this to be the existentialist starting point. This is the reason that Sartre talks about anguish

Answer 1

D.如何萨特定义“痛苦”？有什么意义的“痛苦”在他的文章“存在主义”（混合400字）I think from the point of view to define, our life is what we make choices. When we came into the world, creating meaning, with every choice became disturbed us responsibility. The responsibility to make our anguish
根据萨特，痛苦是意识到在他的生活中没有必要。他的一生是一个价值体系持续的只有他的选择维持它。他是一个谁给的值以确定他的那些事情反应在自己周围的一切。一旦他自由的意识，他将有无根的感觉和经验作为自己的价值观来源的痛苦。然后，萨特进一步解释最人逃离痛苦的恶意。诚信是一种自我欺骗，试图对自己说谎。<痛苦明显即使它隐藏>（第213页）
萨特的存在主义是一种哲学，其中涉及的人。它认为，人是他自己，他要在自己选择的痛苦状态。在痛苦中选择的人，因为他没有外部的指导来帮助他，必须依靠自己的道德信念。男人选择完全想他想做的事。他的存在，取决于此。我相信这就是萨特定位于人类存在的意义。萨特认为人的存在才具有意义通过他的行动。该sartrian存在主义发现它非常令人不安的是，上帝不存在，因为他消失在一个可理解的天堂找到值的所有希望。如陀思妥耶夫斯基曾经说，如果上帝不存在，那么一切都将被允许。（PG 22）声称这是萨特存在主义的出发点。这是萨特讨论痛苦的原因

Answer 2

d. How does Sartre define "anguish"? What is the significance of "anguish" in his essay "Existentialism" (mix 400 words)
In my opinion, our lives, as defined from an aspect of existentialism, are the choices made by
ourselves. Since we come to the world and become beings, it is our uncollected obligations
to sustain each choice we made, and such obligations make extremely anguished.
我认为从存在主义的观点来定义，我们的生活就是我们做出的选择。当我们来到世上，产生意义时，接受每一个选择就成了令我们不安的责任。这个责任使我们极度痛苦
According to Sartre, anguish is the realization [that there is] of no necessity in his life. His life is a system of values sustained in being only by his choice of sustaining it. He is the one who gives value to everything around him [self] in order to determine his reaction to those things. Once he has the consciousness of his freedom, he will have the 【sensation of groundlessness这个词不太理解，无厘头？】and experience the anguish [of being the source of] from his own values. Then Sartre further explains most people flee anguish in bad faith. Bad faith is a form of self-deception, trying to tell lies to himself. <…anguish is evident even when it conceals itself> (p213)
Sartre's existentialism is a philosophy which deals with man. It states that man is that [which he] who makes [of] himself and [that he] who has to make his own choices in a state of anguish. Man [chooses] makes choices in anguish, because he has no external guidelines to help him and [must] has to rely on his own morals and beliefs. Man [chooses] makes choices completely [want] on what he wants [to do]. This is the whole meaning of his existence and being [depends on this]. This is [where] what I believe Sartre [locates] defines the meaning [to] of man's existence. According to Sartre, man's existence [takes on] bears meaning only through his actions. The Sartrean existentialist finds it extremely troubling that God does not exist because with Him, all hope of finding values in an intelligible heaven will vanish. As Dostoevsky once said, ‘If God did not exist, then everything would be permitted’ (pg 22). Sartre claims this to be the starting point of existentialist. This is the reason that Sartre talks about anguish.
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是不要的了的句子 可以删掉 那删掉之後会通顺吗

我还有个问题 我这样的回答 有符合题目问的嘛?

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1. 将方括号[]里的内容删除后才通顺。【】除外，这是疑问，我不太明白。
2. 基本扣题。