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帮忙翻译一下英文的入学申请自荐信,万分谢谢,好的就加分！！!

尊敬的(这里该填什么不知道,因为只知道是寄往招生办，替我想个合适的吧谢谢):
我写信申请成为贵校的一员,我将很感激您抽空阅读我的自荐信。
我是毕业于XXXX,正在寻求更高层次的教育。这实在是一件幸运和令人兴奋的事情——在我的故乡就能这样有一所国际一流的大学。我非常珍惜这个机会并热切盼望成为贵校的一名本科生，来作更多的学习和探索。
我从小在这里长大，从小都喜欢学习和体验不了解的东西，特别是那些。。。（怎么写好？？）的东西，（然后怎么写夸自己一下，让招生办觉得我会很适合做他们的学生？那是个英国知名大学的分校，最好要说说自己英语水平不错）
我对于贵校的商学院有着特殊的热情，并作了相当多的了解。我热爱金融和管理，热爱先进的理论和所有教授们的经验，以及所有可以进行的实践活动，这一定能使我的大学生涯成为极其富有意义和充实感的四年。我相信贵校的商学院是一所与众不同的商学院，有着充满人格魅力的教授、与世界同步的先进理论、年轻活跃的同学、先进的设备和完备的图书资料，更是一个非常好的，培养精英并促进精英之间互相交流的平台。
金融和管理是我的志向，而贵校的赏学院，正是我理想中最初和极重要的一步。
我再重申一次，我万分珍惜能进入贵校学习的机会——如果我可以的话。再次感谢您抽空阅读我的自荐信。
还有最后祝愿辞怎么写...谢谢...

Answer 1

Dear Master.
I am writing to apply for one of your school, I will be very grateful to you for taking the time to read my letter.
I graduated from the xxx school,is seeking a higher level of education. This is a fortunate and the exciting thing in my hometown which will be able to have such a world-class universities.I cherish this opportunity and look forward to become one of your school students, to do more study and exploration very much.
I have your business college has a special enthusiasm, and made a lot of understanding.I love the finance ,management, advanced the theory ,experience and experience Practice.It will make my college career to become an extremely meaningful .
I believe that business college is a unique.

Answer 2

开头写to whom it may concern 或者 dear sir or Madam

Answer 3

Dear (here do not know what the filling, because only know that is sent to the Office of Admissions, for a suitable I would like to thank the bar):
I am writing to apply for one of your school, I will be very grateful to you for taking the time to read my Zi Jianxin.
I graduated from XXXX, is seeking a higher level of education. This is a fortunate and the exciting thing - in my hometown will be able to have such a world-class universities. I very much cherish this opportunity and look forward to become one of your school students, to do more study and exploration.
I grew up from here, who would like to learn and experience do not understand things, especially those. . . (How to write »») things, (and then how to write their own to boast, so that students do feel that I would be very suitable for their students «It was a well-known British university campus, preferably to talk about their good standard of English)
I have your school's business school has a special enthusiasm, and made a lot of understanding. I love the financial and management, advanced the theory of love and all the professors have the experience and all the practical activities can be carried out, this will make my college career to become an extremely meaningful and Chong Shigan four years. I believe that your school business school is a unique business school, with the full personal charm, Professor of sync with the world advanced theory, the active young students, advanced equipment and a complete book, it is a very good , The elite training and to promote mutual exchanges between the elite of the platform.
Financial and management is my ambition, and your school's college tours, is my idea of the first and most important step.
I repeat, I cherish great access to learning opportunities for your school - if I may so. Thank you again for taking the time to read my Zi Jianxin.

Answer 4

Dear teacher，
I am writing to apply for a member of your school,.I will be very grateful for taking your time to read my letter.
I graduated from XXXX,and I am looking for a further education. It is fortunate that there is such a world-class universities in my hometown . I cherish this opportunity very much and look forward to become a menber of your school, to study more and exploration more.
I grew up here,and would like to learn and experience unkown things, especially the knowedge I don't konw, I have read many English books.
I have a special enthusiasm for the business school in your school, and learn a lot about it. I love the financial and management, advanced theory and the experience of the professors and also all the practical activities, this will make my college career became extremely meaningful and richful in the coming four years. I believe that your school business school is unique, with the full personal charm Professor ,and the world advanced theory, the active young students, advanced equipment and complete books, it is a very good training and to promote mutual exchanges between the elite of the platform.
Financial and management is my will, and your school's college tours, is my idea of the first and most important step.
To sum up. I cherish learning opportunities for your school a lot.
Thank you again for taking your time to read my letter.
Best wishes

Answer 5

这都是我自己写的，绝对独家哦，如果采用了要感谢我。祝你成功！

这是修改后的汉文版

尊敬的
我写信申请成为贵校的一员,我将很感激您抽空阅读我的自荐信。
我是毕业于XXXX,正在寻求更高层次的教育。这实在是一件幸运和令人兴奋的事情——在我的故乡就能这样有一所国际一流的大学。我非常珍惜这个机会并热切盼望成为贵校的一名学生，来作更多的学习和探索。
我从小在这里长大，从小都喜欢学习和体验不了解的东西，特别是些与商业有关的。而且上学以来我就非常喜欢英语，对外国的文化尤其是英国的文化十分感兴趣。
我相信贵校的商学院是一所与众不同的商学院，有着充满人格魅力的教授、与世界同步的先进理论、年轻活跃的同学、先进的设备和完备的图书资料，更是一个非常好的，培养精英并促进精英之间互相交流的平台。我对于贵校的商学院有着特殊的热情，并做了充分的了解。
我喜欢金融和管理，喜欢先进的理论和所有教授们的经验，以及所有可以进行的实践活动。这一定能使我的大学生涯成为极其富有意义和充实感的四年。金融和管理是我的志向，而贵校的赏学院，正是我理想中最初和极重要的一步。
如果我可以的话，我将非常珍惜能进入贵校学习的机会。再次感谢您抽空阅读我的自荐信。

英文版

DearXXX，
I am writing to apply for a menber of your school, I will be very grateful to you for taking the time to read my self-recommendation letter.
I graduated from XXXX, is seeking a higher level of education. This is a fortunate and the exciting thing that my hometown be able to have such a world-class university. I cherish this opportunity very much and look forward to becoming a student of your school, to do more study and exploration.
I grew up here, who would like to learn and experience something unknown, especially those in relation to business. And,since I have gone to school,I love English.I am interrested in foreign culture especially the culture of the United Kingdom.
I believe that your school business' collage is a unique one, with the professor full of personal charm, with the sync world advanced theory, the active young students, advanced equipment and a variety of books.It is a very good place where trains the elite and promotes mutual communications between the elite.
I has a special enthusiasm to your school's business collage.So I made full understanding about it. I like finance and management.Thus I think I can have all the advanced theories and the experiences of the practical activities.It will make my college life become an extremely meaningful during the four years. Financial and management is my ambition.And your school's college is the first and most important step of my idea.
If I have the honor to go to your school, I will treasure the learning opportunity at your school. Thank you again for taking the time to read my self-recommendation letter.
Best wishes
XXXX

Answer 6

我给你翻,我可以给你写这个的建议.我一年前刚写这个.
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