Question

帮帮我写一篇英语短文,急！！下午就交了 内容如下:

1.假如你是阳光社区中心的主任威尔逊，你想推荐安娜角逐今年的青年服务奖。
2.安娜每天来你们社区；她擅长画画，并教孩子们画画；有时她周末来社区中心教英语；她很聪明，为社区做了很多贡献。
3.安娜善良、开朗并且对人友善，因此社区所有成员都非常喜欢她。
4.上个月，安娜打网球时伤了胳膊，但她依然坚持来社区。虽然对她而言做事更难了，但她还是来帮助大家。她说帮助别人她感到快乐。
5.很多社区成员都认为安娜应该获奖。我们希望您能同意，期待着您的答复。
Sunshine Community Centre
Xinhua Street
Green Town
7th Nov.
The Manager of the Youth Awards Centre
Changchun Road
Shanghai
Dear Sir/Madam
Youth Service Award for Anna
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Yours faithfully
Wilson
Chairman
不要机器翻译的！！！！！
水平不要太高，初三水平就行了

Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam尊敬的先生/女士：
I was the director of the Sunshine Community Centre Wilson, we'd like to recommend Anna to compete for this year's Youth Service Award.
Anna daily to our community; She specializes in painting, and teach children to draw; sometimes her weekends to community centers to teach English; She is very smart and has done a lot of contributions to the community. Anna kind, cheerful and friendly people, so we are very fond of her.
Last month, Anna hurt his arm playing tennis, but she still adhere to the community. More difficult for her to do things, but she was to help. She said she was happy to help others.
Many members of the community that Anna should be winning. We hope you agree and look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully
Wilson
Chairman
望采纳，谢谢！如果不满意我可以修改。

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你的很好，但是不满足我的条件：初三水平，
你这完全不是初三学生写出来的，。

Answer 2

1 if you are the director of Wilson Sunshine Community Center, you would like to recommend Anna for this year's youth service award.
2 Anna every day to your community; she is good at drawing, and teach the children painting; sometimes she weekend to community centers to teach English; she is very clever, do a lot of contribution to the community.
3 Anna good, cheerful and friendly to people, so that all members of the community are very like her.
4 last month, Anna injured his arm while playing tennis, but she still adhere to the community. Although the work for her even more difficult, but she came to help us. She said she was happy to help others.
5 many community members think that Anna should win. We hope you will agree to, look forward to your reply.

Answer 3

Sunshine Community Centre
Xinhua Street
Green Town
7th Nov.
The Manager of the Youth Awards Centre
Changchun Road
Shanghai
Dear Sir/Madam
Youth Service Award for Anna
I'm Wilson from Sunshine Community Centre. I would like to recommend Anna. Anna is kind, outgoing and friendly.She is good at drawing.She comes to our community everyday and teaches children to draw. She also teaches children to learn English on weekends.She is very clever and makes a great contribution to our community. All of us like her very much. Last month, Anna hurt her arm when she played tennis.She still came to help us though it was so hard for her.She says helping others makes her happy. We all think Anna may get Youth Service Award.We hope you will give her the chance. We are looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
Wilson
Chairman

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文章还可以，就是注意分段啊