Question

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When I was in elementary school , I did badly in a test.So I felt very disappointed . I a person sat in the room cry and didn't talk to anyone. My mother comforted in the outside , but I still felt very sad . A few hours later , I stopped crying and I understood that it is no use crying yesterday . So I went to the living room and chatted with my mother for a while.And then I went to the movies,read books and did sports with my friends . Finally , I felt much better.

Answer 1

1、首先elementary改为primary要好一些；
2、I a person sat in the room cry and didn't talk to anyone.你这是典型的中文式英语，改为I was crying in the room and didn't talk to anyone.
3、comforted 后要有宾语，加个me
4、My mother comforted in the outside outside是副词，不能说in the outside，直接说outside就可以了。
5、it is no use crying yesterday yesterday代表过去，所以is改为was， it is no use to do sth. 所以应改为it was no use to cry yesterday.
谢谢！

Answer 2

I a person sat in the room cry => I sat in the room alone crying
My mother comforted in the outside => My mother comforted me from the outside
that it is no use crying yesterday => that it was no use crying for the past

Answer 3

1 I a person sat改为I sat •••alone。
2 cry改为crying
3 in the outside改为outside
4 it is no use改为was
5 comforted me