Question

英语在线改错。请问下面的短文哪点错了，为什么错了= =、谢谢

Tom was having much teoubles getting up in morning and was always late with work.His boss wanted to fire him if hee didn't start coming on time,but he went to the doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed.The man did as told and slept really well,wake up before the alarm had even gone off .He had time for a properly breakfast and was still the first reach the factory. ''Boss,''he said,''that medicinge really works ,''''I'm pleasing to hear it ,''said her boss,''and where were you yesterday?"

Answer 1

更正在括号处标出，保证准确率！

Tom was having much (troubles改成trouble) getting up in (加入the) morning and was always late (with改成for) work. His boss wanted to fire him if he didn't start coming on time, (but改成so) he went to the doctor for (去掉a) help. The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take (them改成it) before he went to bed. The man did as told and slept really well, (wake改成waking) up before the alarm had even gone off. He had time for a (properly改成proper) breakfast and was still the first (加入to) reach the factory. ''Boss,'' he said, ''that medicinge really works ,'' ''I'm (pleasing改成pleased) to hear it ,' 'said her boss, ''(and改成but) where were you yesterday?"

解释：
1. troulble是不可数名词（前面有much修饰），所以没有复数形式
2. 固定短语 in the morning
3. 固定短语 be late for sth ...迟到
4. 前后句为因果关系，并非转折关系
5. help是不可数名词，其前不能加a
6. 对应前面的some medicine，所以用单数it（如果是some medicines，才能用them）
7. 形容词proper修饰名词breakfast，而properly是副词，不能修饰名词
8. 不定式短语to reach the factory修饰the first，动词原形reach...无此功能用法
9. pleasing 令人高兴/满意的；pleased 高兴的/满意的
10. 前后句表示转折：但是（but）你昨天在哪里呢？

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Answer 2

你是不是打错打漏了很多字啊！but he went to the doctor gave him这里好像缺字吧
trouble,不可数名词，不能加S
be late for work，不是with
wake up改为woke up，一个句子时态要一直
before the alarm went off, 这里起床的动作发生于闹钟响之前，所以只需用过去式，过去完成时是发生于过去的过去，
properly 改为proper， 形容词修饰名词breakfast
first 后面加上to, to do 不定时做非谓语动词，也可记忆为be+序数词+to do，表示第几名做某事的

追问

3Q，不过我想问问，是不是wake up before the alarm had even gone off 。
这一句的wake 是不是应该改成Waking呢？我不是太确定= =、

追答

不用的，表示一系列的动作，可以逗号连接几个动词过去式的

Answer 3

1.首先那个短语为have trouble (in) doing sth译为做某事遇到麻烦，为固定搭配，所以应把你那个teoubles改为troubles
2.be late for sth,译为做某事迟的，所以把你的with改为for

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