Question

求英语大虾解答

”Will you come to China earlier than May 19th so that you can have time to discuss with our colleagues on how to make work together more effective?“这句话有问题吗？

Answer 1

你好:
有点问题 : 1 表示"在5月19号之前" 不用 ealier than 用 : before

2 表示"有充足的时间做...." 最好不用 you can have time (太中文式) 可以用:
you can get enough time to

3 表示 "合作;协作" 不用 work together 用 : working together (动名词短语
作宾语)

修改后为: "Will you come to China before May 19th so that you can get enough time to discuss with our colleagues on how to make working together more effective?"

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Answer 2

太中文式了，给你改了一下：
Will you come to China before May 19th so that you can have time to discuss with our colleagues about how to work together more effectively?

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Answer 3

没问题 但是通常不会这么讲
换成请求语气比较合适个人感觉 could you please come to⋯⋯
或者is it convenient（possible） for you to come⋯⋯

Answer 4

earlier than 改成before ，make work together more effective如果你是想说“使我们在一起工作更有效率”的话work前面加个our比较好。

Answer 5

before May 19th