Question

高中英语改错

I joined a program call the"happy school"in the holidays .it was given to some volunteers from the universities in our city .there were many courses ,including photography ,painting ,basketball training for us to choose from .these courses were intended to help us left -behind middle school student in the countryside ,our parents are working in other cities ,make use of our holidays .the volunteers took good care of us ,showed them how to do our homework and make sure of our safety .i learned a lot from

Answer 1

I joined a program call（called） the"happy school"in the holidays .it was given to some volunteers from（by） the universities in our city .there were many courses ,including photography ,painting ,(and) basketball training from which we can choose .(改成定语从句较好)these courses were intended to help us middle school student in the countryside who are left -behind （改成定语从句）。our parents are working in other cities , so they hold this activity in order to make our holidays interesting.（用make use of 不好， 改成make ...interesting ）The volunteers took good care of us ,care about safety and showed us (them 改成us才符合逻辑)how to do our homework . And we learned a lot from this activity.有些地方改动较大， 没有完全标出来。总体上这篇作文写的还可以，能学会用一些从句或非谓语动词， 将逻辑理顺，适当用一些连词。

Answer 2

去掉after这是确定无疑的！判断这个错句错误之处，需要看懂句子大意、了解soon和soon after的用法，另外还可以借助划分句子成分的方法来确定。
首先，了解下soon和soon after。soon 意思是“不久”，副词，可以单独作时间状语。soon after的意思是“......之后不久”，由于after有介词和连词词性，所以soon after后面可以接名词、起名词作用的短语、代词做时间状语，或者soon after引导时间状语从句。
其次，划分句子成分判断。刚才提到了soon after可以引导时间状语从句，如果认为Soon after the firefighters will come.是从句的话，那么这道题就出错了（显然不是这种情况），因为从句一般不能脱离主句而单独存在。排除了从句的可能性，显然上面的句子是简单句，有主语、谓语和状语三个句子成分。soon单独作时间状语，will和come共同作谓语，句子剩余的部分作主语。那么什么可以做主语呢？可以做主语的有代词、名词、起名词作用的短语（动词不定式和动名词）、主语从句等。所以，介词after不能和名词the firefighters共同做主语。
最后，通过以上两点，可以断定句子大意是“不久消防队员就要来了”，应该删除after,名词the firefighters单独作主语。

Answer 3

I joined a program called the"happy school"in the holidays .it was given to some volunteers from the universities in our city .there were many courses ,including photography ,painting ,basketball training for us to choose from .these courses were intended to help us left -behind middle school student in the countryside ,our parents are working in other cities ,make use of our holidays .the volunteers took good care of us ,showed them how to do our homework and make sure of our safety .i learned a lot from

Answer 4

1、program called
2、对的
3、choose from from去掉

4、middle school student（s）复数
5、

6、showed （us） how to do our homework

7、（made） sure of our safety

8、i learned a lot from如果就此完了，后面没this program 则去掉from

其他就没改出了 @_@

Answer 5

1.call-called 2.holdays-holday 3.to-by 4.are去掉 5.them-us 6.make-made 7.from后加it