Question

这是1分钟的英文自我介绍，请英语好的同学帮我找一下语法或者单词错误，能帮我改进的话更好了，会加分的

Thank you for giving me the chance to interview ,and ti is my pleasure to introduce myself to you.My name is xxx,I came from a small town in HeBei province.
I major in clinic medicine and will graduate from the Inner Mogolia Medicine University in July,2013.During the past five years,I have learned systematically the theory of normal human body and illnesses and got the basic skills about clinic examination
额。。。请英语专业的来。 高中生还是绕道吧

Answer 1

Thank you for giving me this chance to interview, and it is my pleasure to introduce myself to you. My name is xxx, I came from a small town in He Bei province. I major in clinc is medicine. I graduated from the Inner Mogolia Medicin University in July, 2013. During the past five years, I learned about systematicaly the theory of normal human body and illnesses. I got the basic skills about clinic examinations.

希望采纳！

Answer 2

Thank you for giving me the chance to be here,and it is my honor to introduce myself to all of you.My name is xxx,I come from a small town in HeBei province. My major is clinic medicine and I will graduate from the Inner Mogolia Medicine University in July,2013.During the past five years,I have learned systematically theory of normal human body and illnesses.Besides, I have passed the basic skills about clinic test.
建议你直接说说你的中文的专业名称....

Answer 3

came变成come，during变成in，got变成gotten