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英语daily report，大家帮忙修改一下

前面内容应该没问题了，直接放正文~希望有大神能帮一下忙，谢谢~
是关于卡卡西的。
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Oh stop. Today I don’t want to tell you their stories, I only want to introduce a
character to you.
Err… Do you know him? Oh, yes, it’s Hatake kakashi. This one.
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He is my favourate cartoon character in all the cartoons. I love him because of not
only his handsomeness, but also his character. Now, let me say something about
him.
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First, about his appearance. He is a mysterious man, who always wears a face mask. All of his fans want to know his covered face. So…
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About his covered face, there are more than one guess. … What is his real face on earth? Who knows! But we can guess that he must be very handsome, because…yes…
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Next, about his disposition. Being late and sluggish is his main characteristics.
“There was a black cat in my way…” ”I helped an old lady cross the street…” “I lost my way on the road of life…” These
are the excuses of him being late. But in fact, it is because of a boy. “I’m sorry, Obito. I haven’t protected Rin well…” In front of a grave, Kakashi often say some strange words. All these are related to an accident in his childhood.
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Kakashi was such a talented child that he was able to become an outstanding ninja at a young age. But he lost his family, so he had felt very lonely until that accident
happened- his team partner Obito died in order to save Kakashi. After that, Kakashi formed a
bad habbit- being late, because he usually went to visit Obito in front of the grave.
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What’s worse, in the following years, Rin and the teacher Minato left the world. Then, Kakashi chose to hide his sadness, and protected his country in silence.
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But now, a terrible thing happened- Obito, Kakashi’s life saver, turned up, and became an enemy of the people all over the world! What will happen next? Will Obito kill Kakashi? Or will Kakashi reclaim
Obito? All the fans want to know the end, right?
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Well, because of the limited time, I can’t introduce more detailed to you. In the end,
I want to tell some Naruto’s fans, maybe you don’t like Kakashi, but please don’t sully him. No matter what happens, I will support him forever!

Answer 1

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哦停止。今天我不想告诉你他们的故事,我只是想介绍一个
　　人物给你。
　　犯错…你认识他吗?哦,是的,这是Hatake卡卡西。这一个。
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他是我最喜欢的卡通人物在所有的漫画。我爱他因为没有
　　只有他的英俊,但还他的性格。现在,让我来说说
　　他。
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　　首先,对自己的外表。他是一个神秘的人,他总是戴着一个面具。他所有的粉丝们想知道他遮面。所以…
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　　关于他的遮面,有不止一个猜。什么是他的真面目…地球上吗?谁知道!但我们可以猜想,他一定很帅,因为…是的…
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　　接下来,关于他的性格。迟到和缓慢的是他的主要特点。
　　“有一只黑色的猫在我的路…”“我帮助一位老太太过马路…”“我迷了路在人生之路上…”这些

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我是要修改，不是要翻译。。。
另外这翻译是用网页翻译的吧？好别扭。

Answer 2

perfect