Question

建议你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目和提纲用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。

1.介绍你的一位同事/同学；
2.你这位同事/同学有什么特点。
My Colleague/Classmate

Answer 1

Talking about classmate, the first person springs to me is Alice, who is optimistic and faithful to friends.
Alice, my best friend, has round face and long curly hair. We've been good friends since we were in middle school.
First, she's very optimistic. She can always find the bright side when she meets difficulties and never gives up. When you are with her, you would feel happy and she just has the magic which makes you believe there's noting impossible.
Secondly, she is a loyal friend, especially when her firends are having problems. Once I didn't pass the math exam, she encoraged me and siad, "success only belongs to the person who never gives up. So just keep trying and you will make it."
She is really a wonderful classmate and definitely a good friend. I'm so happy i met her when I was young and have such a great friendship.

Answer 2

作文还要抄啊，我教你写吧。
设计新颖别致的标题吸引读者
　　文题是文章的窗口，是概括文章内容的言简意赅的语句。读者读一篇文章，首先映入眼帘的就是题目。好的题目，如人的眼睛，能传情显神，让读者“一见钟情”，过目难忘。所以，同学们在作文时，如非命题作文，可首先给文章构思一个具有吸引力、冲击力，让读者见之即惊又喜，不肯舍弃下文的标题。如美国作家舒尔伯格的小说《我的精彩糟糕诗作》；还有学生在写作中用过的题目《高贵的施舍》等，都能给我们耳目一新的感觉，且使文章增添了无限光彩。
　　首先，巧用修辞手法添魅力。因为修辞是一项富于实效性的语言表达方式，用得好，可以达到化抽象为具体的效果。如一位同学在《关心》一文中是这样写地球的：“在远古时代，地球就像一位年轻漂亮的女子，绿荫如盖的大地，是她美丽的肌肤……”读这样的文章就像在欣赏一幅美丽的图画。
　　其次，善用名言警句。如果我们在写作时恰当地运用它，就能收到事半功倍、画龙点睛之效。
　　选择具有时代精神的语言。如一些反映时代发展的词语——“克隆”、“基因”、“因特网”、“情商”等。如果在有些作文中运用这些语言，文章的时代感也会跃然纸上。