Question

英语高手求进。。 英语作文批改。。只要找出语法错误就好了，我原来直接用翻译器翻译的，可能有错误

When Lady Gaga to make public revolt had to let the world crazy, when rihanna sexy temptation to dancing in the wild, Taylor swift, 22, still holding the guitar, quietly sit in the middle of the stage, along with the chiming of the piano sing softly and sweetly.
Taylor Swift is an American country pop singer-songwriter and actress. now, taylor has only been a pro artist for 4 years, and has already released 3 orginal albums, got 8 grammies, and lots of other awards including AMA and CMA.
And she is worth us appreciate quality is never lose. I remember she has a song called "mean", intended to counter those who look down upon her.it is saidSome day, I’ll be big enough so you can’t hit me
And all you’re ever gonna be is mean.
She also has optimistic character.When she is in the set off of the Eiffel Tower to sing the “begin again” I feel that she has positive attitude on life and love
All her she should get the honor
Maybe, in this way can the innocence of really touch our hearts; Maybe, this is the music's nature and sincere.

Answer 1

整篇文章没有几句读起来通顺的，我连汉语意思都弄不明白，更别说找语法错误了。。。你想让人给你翻译了直接发汉语不就得了，不带这么糊弄的。。

Answer 2

首先，您这个肯定是机器翻的；其次，下面的兄弟说了，你不如直接发汉语，我们给你翻译得了。

Answer 3

when lady gaga makes public revolt and makes the world become crazy because of her; when rihanna has her sexy temptation dancing in the wild, Taylor swift, 22, is still holding the guitar, quietly sitting in the middle of the stage along with the chiming of the paino sings softly and sweetly.

Answer 4

机器一弄，把愿意都糟蹋了。

Answer 5

大哥，我中文都明白，还英文呢！！！