Question

下面这段话我已经用英语翻译了，请帮忙修改一下，谢谢高手！

厨师把鸡鸭鱼牛羊猪召集起来，热情地说：今天我们充分发扬民主，你们说说喜欢怎样被人吃掉？众皆不语。这时牛小心翼翼探头却欲言又止。厨师鼓励道：说吧，不要拘束，发扬民主就是要畅所欲言！於是牛说：其实我们都不想被人吃掉！厨师笑著说：你看你，一开口就跑题了......
One day, cook call a meeting. Many family poultry are invited to join this meeting.
Cook said: we will discuss that how to serve human, that is to say what kinds of food you want to be.
There is silent in the meeting place, nobody say anything.
Cook encourage attendee: please, please, you can share your any idea with us, just a meeting.
Cow raised his head, looks likely to say something, but still silent.
Cook said: don't hesitate, you can say anything that you want, we should separate ideas from someone delivering them.
Cow stood up, 'in fact we do want not to be eaten by human...'
Cook said with a smile: sorry, sorry, you are far away our topic.

Answer 1

Once upon a time,a chef called the poultries to have a meeting.
"Today we will be totally democracy."said the chef who was very enthusiastic,"Tell me,what's your favourite way to be eaten?"
The other poultries kept silent while the cow tried to say something but he didn't.The chef said:"Come on!Don't be shy!You can say anything you want.That's why we call the meeting DEMOCRACY!"
So the cow step forward and said:"In fact,none of us wants to be eaten!"The chef laughed and said:"Look at you!You are so far from what we are talking about!"
以上是我的翻译。
cook是动词，也可以代指厨师，但是感觉用正规的chef更好一些。另外讲故事一般要用过去式，所以时态你可能没有注意，前后的时态是乱的。而且有些句子语法是错误的。我水平也有限，你可以作为参考，希望能帮到你。
望采纳~！

Answer 2

• 你前半截用的是现在时，后半截用的是过去时（以“Cow raised his head, looks likely to say something, but still silent.”为界）

• 跑题用stray from the point是不是好一些？

Answer 3

A day of the conference. Poultry are invited to attend the meeting. The Cook said: we will discuss what you want to do food. There was silence meeting place, nobody said anything. The cook to encourage the participants: you can share any ideas you have with us, just a meeting. Cattle raised his head, seems to want to say something, but still silent. The Cook said: don't hesitate, you can say whatever you want, we should offer them advice. Cows stood up, "in fact, we don't want to be eaten...... "Cook said with a smile: sorry, you stay away from me.