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毕业论文摘要英文翻译，求英文专业高手帮忙翻译，谢谢了~

随着信息技术的不断发展以及在网络的新浪潮下，购物方式趋向多元化，网购逐渐融入到人们的日常生活中。电子商务作为一种新兴的商业模式近几年在迅速发展，在互联网行业占据着重要的位置。在电子商务处于大热的情况下，将传统的蛋糕店运用B2C运营模式实现在线销售，更灵活方便地进行管理。本在线蛋糕店系统采用myeclipse8.5+sql server2005进行开发，开发基于jsp+web技术，分为前端和后台管理两大部分。从最开始的需求设计到概要设计再到详细设计，每一步都是对系统的进一步分解，落实到每个细节。在很多成功的电子商务案例下，本系统试图能够做出具有自己风格的在线销售网站。本系统实现了销售系统操作简洁，界面友好，能让用户方便的进行浏览蛋糕信息并购买，为管理员提供了增删蛋糕和订单处理等日常后台管理的功能。经过不断地调试和运行，系统能够稳定的工作，较好的实现了在线销售系统所应具备的基本功能。
如果能通过老师批阅，再追加10分，分不是很多，求好心人啊，我已经卡在摘要上了，被老师打回好几次了

Answer 1

With the continuous development of information technologies and networks with the new wave of shopping become diversified, buying gradually integrated into people's daily lives. E-commerce as an emerging business model in recent years, the rapid development, occupies an important position in the Internet industry. In the case of e-commerce is hot, applying the traditional cake shops B2C business model for online sales, more flexible and easy to manage. Online cake shop system development using myeclipse8.5+SQL Server2005, developed based on JSP+web technology, is divided into front-end and back-office operations most. From the beginning of design to design to detailed design, are further broken down to the system at every step, into every detail. Many successful cases of e-commerce, the system tries to be able to make online sales site with its own style. This user friendly system to achieve a sales system, friendly interface enables users to easily browse cake information and purchase, giving administrators add/drop, such as cake and order processing routine admin functions. Through continuous commissioning and operation system to stable employment, better online sales system the basic functions.

行么？

Answer 2

学校要求不严的话。直接用谷歌翻译或百度翻译就行了，我的就是的，不过我们学校对这个要求不严格

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我们老师要求很严格，我怎么翻他都不满意，还是需要专业的人看看