Question

初一英语作文 急求！！！！ 重赏！！！

假设你是初一(1)班的学生,星期天你和老师同学一起去公园玩.请用现在进行时态写一篇50词左右的英语短文描述活动情况。
人物 活动 地点
叶老师 讲故事 在湖（lake）边
一些女生 唱歌跳舞 在一棵大树下
Mary和Sally 看书 在沙滩上
一些男生 拍照 在湖边
其他人 划船（boat ） 在湖里
迟了啊!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 1

I'm a student at Class 1 Grade 1. I am going to the park with my teachers and classmates.
Miss. ye is telling a stories near the lake. Some girls are singing and songing under the tree. My friends Mary and Sally are reading books next to the beach, and other boys are taking photos next to the lake. Other children are rowing boats in the lake. We are having a good time in the park.
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Answer 2

Hello,I am a student.Today is Sunday,we are playing in a park.MrYe is telling stories on the lake side.Some girls are singing and songing under the tree. My friends Mary and Sally are reading books next to the beach, and other boys are taking photos next to the lake. Other children are rowing boats in the lake.This is a nice Sunday.

Answer 3

Hello,everyone,I am a student.Today is Sunday,we are playing in a park.MrYe is telling stories on the lake side.Some girls are singing and songing under the tree. My friends Mary and Sally are reading books next to the beach, and other boys are taking photos next to the lake. Other children are rowing boats in the lake.This is a nice Sunday.