Question

翻译句子，不要中式英语 不要翻译器翻译的

亲爱的Jane 你的暑假过的如何？我和我的家人现在在长沙的张家界。这里的天气非常好，每天都是天晴的。我正在拍一些照片，带回来给你看。我的父母亲在爬山。很快会见面。

Answer 1

Dear Jane，
How about your summer holidays? I am travelling in Zhangjiajie on Changsha with my family. There is beautiful weather every day. I am taking photos which let me show them to you after I come back. My parents are hiking now. See you soon.

in Zhangjiajie on Changsha
Zhangjiajie, Changsha 这种用法是比较正式的，例如在报纸上的文章，日常英语（即是口语）会用介词将两个地方连起来。

I……with my family.
英文裏不会用 I and my family / my family and I，只会将I（我）放最前，和我在一起的其他人用 with XXX 连起来放最後。

beautiful weather
地道英语，大晴天的意思。连著 every day 便是『（那里）每天都是大晴天。』

hiking
地道英语，登山或是爬山的意思，英文裏climbing指的是技术攀登，也就是要用绳索辅助的那种攀岩式的爬山方法才能称得上是 mountain climbing，像我们一般的爬山只能说hiking或者hiking in mountain。

Answer 2

Dear Jane how is your summer vacation? My family and I are now in changsha to zhangjiajie. The weather here is very good, every day is sunny. I was take some pictures back to show you. My parents in mountain climbing. Will soon meet.

Answer 3

Dear jean,
How about ur summer holiday?My family and i is stay at zhangjiajie,changsha, now.The weather here is very fine,everyday is a sunshine and bright day.Now ,I m taking some photos, i will show them to u when i come back home.My parents are climbing the mountain now.we will meet each other very soon~~~~
yours,
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Answer 4

Dear Jane,

How is your summer holidays? I am in Zhangjiajie, Changsha with my family. The weather is good here, it is sunny everyday. I am taking some photographs and I will show you when I come back. My parents are climbing the mountian. See you soon.

Answer 5

Dear Jane,
How is your summer holiday?My family and I are now in Zhangjiajie, changsha. The weather here is very good, every day is sunny. I was taking some photos, back to you. My parents in mountain climbing. See you soon.

Yours 署名