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I like eating fruit and vagetables that are for great use to our health. Not only do they prevent us from falling ill, and they help we lose weight. I used to hate vegetables，but following the doctor is advices，I gradual kicked the bad habit. As an old saying goes，“An apple a day keep the doctor away”. However，there are many children dislike fruit and vegetables.On contrary，influenced by this or that kind of advertisement，many are crazy about junk food. As a result of，they become weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion，we must take action to change it.

Answer 1

I like eating fruit and vagetables that are for(改为of) great use to our health. Not only do they prevent us from falling ill, and(改为but) they help we (us)lose weight. I used to hate vegetables，but following(改为followed) the doctor is advices(改为advice)，I gradual (改为gradually)kicked the bad habit. As an old saying goes，“An apple a day keep(改为keeps) the doctor away”. However，there are many children dislike(改为disliking) fruit and(改为or) vegetables.On (加上the)contrary，influenced by this or that kind of advertisement，many are crazy about junk food. As a result of(去掉of)，they become weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion，we must take action to change it 有一句有点问题。but followed the doctor's advice好像是你打错了把所有格's写成了is。 如果那样就把following改为followed

Answer 2

第一行 for great use==》 of great use No only ==> not only
第二行 but also they help us lose weight
doctor‘s advice
第三行 gradually kicked
an apple a day keeps the doctor away
第四行 there are many children who dislike fruit or vegetables
第五行 as a result
第六行 getting stronger

Answer 3

1.for-of 2.and-also 3.we-us 4.following-followed 5.advices-advice 6.gradual-gradually 7.keep-keeps
8.on/\the 9.去掉of 10.strong-stronger