Question

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While traveling, I always take the following things with me, which are my ID card, a camera, a compass, a CD player and some clothes. I think the ID card is a basic and necessary document, and it is a must for tourists wherever they go. The camera is used to take pictures or record what we have done during the trip, and it can bring us a lot of fun. The compass is very essential for us to travel in the forests. Without it, we may get lost. And then the CD player, I think, is also very important for me to kill the time when on the train or the plane. What’s more, I have to bring one or two coats when traveling to a different place. In a word, among all the above, I think the ID card is the most important.

Answer 1

旅行时,我总是采取以下的事情和我,这是我的身份证,一个相机,一个指南针,一个CD播放器和一些衣服。我认为是一个基本的身份证和必要的文档,这是一个必须为游客无论他们去。照相机是用来拍照或记录我们所做的在旅行时,它可以给我们带来很多乐趣。指南针是必不可少的,我们在森林里旅行。没有它,我们可能会迷路。然后CD播放器,我想,也是非常重要的对于我.
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Answer 2

全对, 没有错呀!

注: among all the above (above n.上述) 也可说成:
among all above (above adv.在上面；以上；上述)
意思都一样, 都表示: 在上述所有物品中.