Question

英语的短文改错哈！帮帮忙

题目是这样的： I was deeply moved when I heard the news which three 19-year-old college students were swept away when they are trying to rescue two drowing children.It's said that the live is the most valuable thing for everyone in the world,and the three young boys did not seem to think about it.Instead,they ignored our own lives in order to save others.How a heroic deed it is!Their spirit is what we should learn from.However,some people don't think it is worthwhile risk three lives to save two.I never agree it.In my opinion,we should sometimes stand up for what we believe is right.As a young student,we have the responsibility to help people who are in thoubles no matter what it will cost.要求是改十处（缺漏、删除和修改，语序、大小写不算）。。麻烦帮帮忙额！！

Answer 1

I was deeply moved when I heard the news which（that） three 19-year-old college students were swept away when they are(were) trying to rescue two drowing(drowning )children.It's said(believed) that the live (life)is the most valuable thing for everyone in the world,and the three young boys did not seem to think about it.Instead,they ignored our (their)own lives in order to save others.How(what) a heroic deed it is!Their spirit is what we should learn from（去掉誉改睁）庆岁.However,some people don't think it is worthwhile risk （歼昌to risk)three lives to save two.I never agree(to) it.In my opinion,we should sometimes stand up for what we believe is right.As a young student,we have the responsibility to help people who are in thoubles(trouble) no matter what it will cost.

Answer 2

第一行燃源枝which改为that！第二行皮敏are改为were！live改为life！第三行and改为but！our改为their！第四行how改为what！裂纯删去from！risk 改为risking！agree后加with！最后一行troubles不用复数！