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It'sagreathonorforustospeakhere.MynameisLihua.Myfatherandmotherarebothhighschoolteach...
It's a great honor for us to speak here.My name is Lihua. My father and mother are both high school teachers. Influencing by them. I read widely during my early year age,and I have developed a great interest in arts and sports. I am easy going and taking along well with my classmates. It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates' friendships,and also help meovercome many difficulties in my life. Being admitted in a key university has always been beautiful dream for me. I always dream that I will study happy there ;I always dream that I will swim freely in the sea of knowledge. I hope all my dream will come true in the nearfuture. Thank you.
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It's a great honor for us 【改为me】to speak here.My name is Lihua.
My father and mother are both high school teachers. Influencing【改为influenced】 by them. I read widely during my early year 【去掉year】 age,and I have developed a great interest in arts and sports. I am easy going and taking 【改为getting】along well with my classmates. It is this personality which 【改为that】 helps me win over all my classmates' friendships,and also help 【改为helps】me overcome many difficulties in my life. Being admitted in【改为by】 a key university has always been 【加入a】beautiful dream for me. I always dream that I will study happy 【改为happily】there ;I always dream that I will swim freely in the sea of knowledge. I hope all my dream【改为dreams】 will come true in the near future. Thank you.
My father and mother are both high school teachers. Influencing【改为influenced】 by them. I read widely during my early year 【去掉year】 age,and I have developed a great interest in arts and sports. I am easy going and taking 【改为getting】along well with my classmates. It is this personality which 【改为that】 helps me win over all my classmates' friendships,and also help 【改为helps】me overcome many difficulties in my life. Being admitted in【改为by】 a key university has always been 【加入a】beautiful dream for me. I always dream that I will study happy 【改为happily】there ;I always dream that I will swim freely in the sea of knowledge. I hope all my dream【改为dreams】 will come true in the near future. Thank you.
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It's a great honor for ( 1 ) us to speak here.My name is Lihua. My father and mother are both high school teachers. Influencing by them. I read widely during my early year age,and I have developed a great interest in arts and sports. I am easy going and taking along well with my classmates. It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates' friendships,and also (2)help me overcome many difficulties in my life. Being admitted in a key university has always been beautiful dream for me. I always dream that I will study happy there ;I always dream that I will swim freely in the sea of knowledge. I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.
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