sun is my chinese teacher a meddle aged man with a pair of thick glasses he is a teacher with pat
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没有什么错误，但缺少了一些连接词，改下更好
Sun is my chinese teacher （who is） a meddle aged man with a pair of thick glasses ，（and） he is a teacher with （patience）。 答案补充 meddle 改成middle 答案补充 额……，太多了吧，还是看看吧，郁闷……
Sun is my chinese teacher who is a mIddle aged man with a pair of thick glasses 。He is a teacher with patience and imagination although sometimes he is very strict with us in our studies 。His humor makes his classes lively and interesting。 With his help ，I’m begining to show interest in chinese and have made great progress。 答案补充 He works so hard that he devotes all his time and energy to teaching ,often preparing his lessons late into night. What is more, he often joins us in after-class activity .He is not only our teacher but also our friend .We all love and respect him.
没什么问题，就是大小写问题和标点问题，这作文写的不错啊！
Sun is my chinese teacher （who is） a meddle aged man with a pair of thick glasses ，（and） he is a teacher with （patience）。 答案补充 meddle 改成middle 答案补充 额……，太多了吧，还是看看吧，郁闷……
Sun is my chinese teacher who is a mIddle aged man with a pair of thick glasses 。He is a teacher with patience and imagination although sometimes he is very strict with us in our studies 。His humor makes his classes lively and interesting。 With his help ，I’m begining to show interest in chinese and have made great progress。 答案补充 He works so hard that he devotes all his time and energy to teaching ,often preparing his lessons late into night. What is more, he often joins us in after-class activity .He is not only our teacher but also our friend .We all love and respect him.
没什么问题，就是大小写问题和标点问题，这作文写的不错啊！
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