Question

一段英语小文章怎么翻译？很急！！！！

在上海，一年有四个季节。分别是春天，夏天，秋天和冬天。但我最喜欢的季节是夏天。夏天是热的。太阳闪闪发光。我会在大海里游泳。我喜欢吃冰淇淋在夏天。我也喜欢在夏天穿漂亮的裙子。我喜欢夏天。

Answer 1

In Shanghai, there are four distinctive seasons in a year, which are spring, summer, autumn (or fall, depending on which country you are from ) and winter. Among the four seasons, summer is my favorite one. Summer is hot because the sun shines very enthusiastically. I will swim in a sea. And I can eat icecream in summer. And I like to wear beautiful dresses in summer. I like summer so much.
仅供参考，欢迎指正

追问

能不能这样？
In Shanghai, there are four seasons in a year, they are spring, summer, autumn and winter.but my favorite season is summer. summer is hot. the sun shine and shine.I can swim in sea. i like eating ice-cream in summer. And I like to wear beautiful dresses in summer too.I like summer.

追答

标点符号，大小写，主谓一致，冠词等方面存在问题。

Answer 2

There are four seasons every year in Shanghai：spring，summer，autumn and winter。But，summer is my favorite one。It's hot，sun shines brightly。I’ll swim in the sea。I‘d like to have some ice cream in summer。I also like to dress pretty dresses。。。I like summer。

追问

能不能这样？
In Shanghai, there are four seasons in a year, they are spring, summer, autumn and winter.but my favorite season is summer. summer is hot. the sun shine and shine.I can swim in sea. i like eating ice-cream in summer. And I like to wear beautiful dresses in summer too.I like summer.

追答

个人习惯问题了。我还是对语法比较敏感。。。

Answer 3

In Shanghai, there are four seasons in a year. Respectively is spring, summer, autumn and winter. But my favorite season is summer. Summer is hot. The sun shine. I can swim in the sea. I like to eat ice cream in summer. I also like to wear beautiful skirt in summer. I like summer.

Answer 4

哦，
这个我们也翻译了，我的也改过了，全对！

追问

你的是哪个

追答

In shanghai.,there are four season in year.Respectively is spring, summer, autumn and winter. But my favorite season is summer. Summer is hot. The sun shine. I can swim in the sea. I like to eat ice cream in summer. I also like to wear beautiful skirt in summer. I like summer.放心抄吧，我的已被老师改过， 100分。问题补充：请勿复制！仅供参考！

Answer 5

改过的那个更好

追问

是我的吗？

追答

应该是“追问”后面那个

Answer 6

上面是对的