Question

求英语大神翻译一段话，谢谢~~~

商业银行内部控制是商业银行为实现经营目标，通过制定和实施一系列制度、程序和方法，对风险进行事前防范、事中控制、事后监督和纠正的动态过程和机制。
本文通过对商业银行内部控制研究的背景及重要性进行阐释，分析目前商业银行内部控制的现状，并比照国际通行的商业银行内部控制方式，对商业银行内部控制制度所存在的缺陷和执行中存在的问题进行了阐述和分析；同时对造成商业银行内控缺陷的原因进行了分析。结合国外商业银行内控的先进理念，从而找到提高我国商业银行内控制度建设的对策，从而实现商业银行的稳定发展。

Answer 1

商业银行内部控制是商业银行为实现经营目标，通过制定和实施一系列制度、程序和方法，对风险进行事前防范、事中控制、事后监督和纠正的动态过程和机制。
Commercial Banks internal control is the commercial Banks to achieve business objectives, through the formulation and implementation of a series of systems, procedures and methods, to advance the risk beforehand prevention, control, after monitoring and corrective dynamic process and mechanism.
本文通过对商业银行内部控制研究的背景及重要性进行阐释，分析目前商业银行内部控制的现状，并比照国际通行的商业银行内部控制方式，对商业银行内部控制制度所存在的缺陷和执行中存在的问题进行了阐述和分析；同时对造成商业银行内控缺陷的原因进行了分析。结合国外商业银行内控的先进理念，从而找到提高我国商业银行内控制度建设的对策，从而实现商业银行的稳定发展。
This article through to the commercial Banks internal control research background and significance of the interpretation, analysis of the present condition of the commercial Banks internal control, and according to international common commercial Banks internal control mode, the deficiency of internal control system in the commercial bank and enforcement were expounded and the problems in the analysis; At the same time to cause of commercial bank internal control defects are analyzed. Combined with foreign commercial Banks in the advanced concept of internal control, so as to find the countermeasures to promote China's commercial Banks internal control system construction, so as to realize the stable development of the commercial Banks.
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Answer 2

翻译：
Commercial Banks internal control is the commercial Banks to achieve business objectives, through the formulation and implementation of a series of systems, procedures and methods, to advance the risk beforehand prevention, control, after monitoring and corrective dynamic process and mechanism. This article through to the commercial Banks internal control research background and significance of the interpretation, analysis of the present condition of the commercial Banks internal control, and according to international common commercial Banks internal control mode, the deficiency of internal control system in the commercial bank and enforcement were expounded and the problems in the analysis; At the same time to cause of commercial bank internal control defects are analyzed. Combined with foreign commercial Banks in the advanced concept of internal control, so as to find the countermeasures to promote China's commercial Banks internal control system construction, so as to realize the stable development of the commercial Banks.

Answer 3

Internal control is a dynamic process and mechanism implemented by commercial banks to achieve their operation targets; it involves the formulating and implementing of a series of systems, procedures and methods to prevent risks in advance, control during the process, and conduct subsequent supervision and correction.
By expounding on the background and importance of the study in commercial banks' internal control, this paper analyzes the present state of internal control in commercial banks and compares it with the internationally-accepted practice. Then it describes and analyzes the existing problems and shortcomings of the internal control system in commercial banks, as well as their causes. By integrating the advanced concepts of foreign banks, it attempts to seek measures that can enhance the internal control setup for China's commercial banks, so as to achieve their stable development.

建议：优化摘要原文，删除重复措辞。

Answer 4

这么长，，还一段。。。我去。。。

Internal control of commercial bank is a commercial bank in order to achieve business objectives, the implementation of a series of systems, procedures and methods by making and, the risk prevention, process control, monitoring and correction after the dynamic process and mechanism.（鄙视那些复制我的人）

Answer 5

这话值得应该是五十元