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I still remember for the first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollars in my pockets, and so I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is the totally different experience for three main reasons: being more responsibly, more decisive and more creative. Because I ’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I haveto be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In the other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow.

Answer 1

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I still remember【/ 】 the first time I 【decided】 to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble 【getting】 along with my parents. I had about fifty dollars in my pockets, 【/ 】 so I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home 【when 】 I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is the totally different experience for three main reasons: being more【 responsible】, more decisive and more creative. Because I ’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told 【 to】. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their 【advice】. 【On】the other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules for 【 myself 】 to follow.

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Answer 2

I was having trouble get（getting） along with my parents.

I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices.(advice)

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