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求英语大神帮我检查一下这个翻译的问题，十分感谢！（最好能帮我改一下）

This paper briefly introduces the pollution of heavy metals in tea ways and several methods of determination of heavy metal contents in tea. Was treated by microwave digestion tea samples in the experiment, the microwave digestion has the advantages of rapid, complete, low blank. Method for determination of lead content of selected in this paper for flame atomic absorption spectrometry, this method has good selectivity and accuracy and precision is high and the operation is simple. Under the given experimental conditions measured recovery of lead in tea was 98%~102%. RSD<3%. The experimental method is simple, convenient operation, accuracy and high sensitivity, good repeatability. Can be used for the detection of lead in tea

Answer 1

意思如下：
本文简要介绍了在茶叶中重金属含量的测定茶叶的方法和几种重金属污染。采用微波消解处理样品的实验茶，微波消解法具有快速，完整的优点，空白值低。铅含量对本文选取的火焰原子吸收光谱法测定方法，该方法具有良好的选择性和准确度和精密度高，操作简单。给定的实验条件下测定茶叶中铅的回收98% ~ 102%。RSD＜3%。实验方法简单，操作方便，准确度和灵敏度高，重现性好。可用于茶叶中铅的检测

This paper briefly
introduces the pollution of heavy metals in tea ways and several methods of
determination of heavy metal contents in tea.

[低频警示] introduce...pollution 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[低频警示] heavy metal contents in tea
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[低频警示] tea ways 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

Method for determination of
lead content of selected in this paper for flame atomic absorption spectrometry,
this method has good selectivity and accuracy and precision is high and the
operation is simple.

[低频警示] good...selectivity 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[批改提示]
select有“精选”之意。注意与choose区别。

Under the given
experimental conditions measured recovery of lead in tea was 98% to 102%.

[低频警示] measured...recovery 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[低频警示] lead in tea 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[批改提示] 注意condition和conditions，something区别。
名词condition用作复数形式，表示“外界状况”，“周围情形”[circumstances that affect
an activity or situation]；而用作单数形式却表示(某人或某物所处)“状态”，“状况”[the state in which a
person or thing is】。

The experimental method is
simple, convenient operation, accuracy and high sensitivity, good
repeatability.

[低频警示] good...repeatability 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
。

1

Can be used for the
detection of lead in tea

[句子错误] 句子不完整

[低频警示] lead in tea 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

Answer 2

This study aimed at introducing the pollution of heavy metals in tea and two methods of detecting heavy metal contents in tea. Tea samples used in the experiment are treated by microwave digestion ,the microwave digestion has the advantages of rapid, complete, low blank. another method for detection of lead content in selected tea samples is flame atomic absorption spectrometry, this method has good selectivity and high accuracy ,and the proceddure is simple. Under the given experimental conditions measured recovery of lead in tea is 98%~102%. RSD<3%. The experimental methods are simple as well as convenient to operate, the results are accurate with good repeatability, can be applied for the detection of lead in tea.

追问

貌似第一句有问题，