短文改错One day i went shopping at a gift shop.i was greatly interesting and i lost me in beauti... 30
短文改错Onedayiwentshoppingatagiftshop.iwasgreatlyinterestingandilostmeinbeautieulgoods.b...
短文改错One day i went shopping at a gift shop.i was greatly interesting and i lost me in beautieul goods.before i paid for what i had bought,i left my handbag on the counter.there was about two thousand dollar in it.
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有6处需要改动:
1. at a gift shop—in a gift shop
2. greatly intresting—greatly intrested
3. lost me—lost myself
4. before—Before
5. there was—There were
6. two thousand dollor—two thousand dollors
当然啦,其中两个首字母未大写可能是因为打字方便。建议一下,如果可以,就把最后一句作为定语放在handbag后面,这样子意思会更紧凑一些。希望能帮上忙O(∩_∩)O~
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interesting 改成interested
me 改成myself
before 改成after
was改成were
dollar改成dollars
me 改成myself
before 改成after
was改成were
dollar改成dollars
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interesting-interested
me-myself
beautieul-beautiful
dollar-dollars
me-myself
beautieul-beautiful
dollar-dollars
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1be interested
2lose oneself in
3there were
2lose oneself in
3there were
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