Question

请求大家帮忙将下面几段话翻译成英文，高分奖励，需要地道的翻译，急求！

就像我前一封邮件提到的一样，因为贵国有良好的英语学习环境，很多的中国高校和贵国的学校都开展了一些合作培养学生的项目。有些项目对学生毕业要求很高，有些项目的入学门槛就很低，对学生毕业要求也不高。我还想咨询一下您，你们学校现在有没有意向和中国的大学合作培养学生，包括本科、硕士课程。

比如，以我所在的学校为例，我有初步的一个合作设想：

我现在所在的学校是一所民办的全日制高职学校，大部分学生成绩都不是很好。

我校学生在校读3年后可以获得我校颁发的专科毕业证。我校学生在毕业后，去你校读9-12个月，由你校发放贵国教育部门承认的本科毕业证。第一年招生的人数在10人左右，从第二年开始人数逐渐增加到50-100人，甚至更多。你校每年向学生收取学费15万元左右。

但是，第一年招生的学生质量可能不高，他们去你校学习可能比较吃力，但你们也要尽量保证他们能够在一年后获得本科毕业证。

如果你们有合作意向，我可以先向我校的学校领导汇报，然后再商量具体的协议内容。
英语高手们帮帮我啊！感谢！ 2013.5.25晚

Answer 1

What about the following one?
It is just like what I have mentioned in my last mail, since there is a good learning environment for English in your country, there are many Chinese colleges and universities have developed some projects in educating students together with colleges and universities from your country already. Some of the projects asked for high requirements on the graduation of the students, while some others asked a lower threshold on entrance and also lower requirements on the graduation. In this case, I also want to know weather your school has the intention to cooperate with Chinese schools on this kind of cooperation or not, including the course for both undergraduate and graduate.
For instance, take the school which I am currently working in as an example, I have a primary assumption on this kind of cooperation.
Our school is a full time privately-run higher vocational college; the grades for most of the students are not very good. Students in our college can get a junior college diploma which will be issued by our school after 3 years studying. After their graduation, they will go to your school and study for nine to twelve months, and then your school will issue them a graduation certificate (Undergraduate certificate) which is admitted by the Ministry of Education in your country. The intake of the students is about 10 for the first year, and from the second year, the number could be increased to 50 to 100 or even more, and you can charge them about 150,000.00RMB (about 25,000.00USD) per year as the tuition fees.
But the quality of the students may not be very high for the first year, and it could be difficult for them to learn at your school, though you have to try the best to guarantee that they can get the graduation certificate after one year’s study.
If you are interest in such kind of cooperation, I can report to our school authorities first and then we can negotiate about the details of the agreement.

你认为需要改动的地方，请指出！

Answer 2

　　As what I had said in the previous email, because your country is good for studying English, many universities and colleges in China have cooperation projects of teaching with some universities and colleges in your country. Some projects are rigorous about graduation, but some others are not. I also want to know whether you are willing to open some cooperation projects, including bachelor and master course, with Chinese universities or colleges.
　　First, I have a primary tentative plan aboutcooperation project:
　　I am working in avoluntary full-time vocational college, the grade of most students is not good.
　　The new students will get an academy diploma of our college after 3-year study, and then they keep studying in your university a period about 9~12 months, after the period your university will give a bachelor diploma which is approbatory in the education government department of your country. First year, the number of students is about 10, the number will grow up to 50~100, even more in the second year. Students will give your university 150 thousand RMB/year as tuition fee.
　　The students of first year are not potential in study, study to them is hard, but your university should try your best to make them be graduated in one year.
　　If you want to be cooperative with us, you can contact the chair man of our college first, then we will talk about the contract concretely.

I want to know what is this using for????????

追问

还不是很准确 。 发给国外的学校了

追答

不好意思，权当练习，帮不上忙，万望见谅！！

Answer 3

As I mentioned to you before an email, because your country has a good English learning environment, a lot of Chinese universities and schools in your country have conducted some cooperation to cultivate the students' projects. Some projects for students graduation requirements is very high, some project admission threshold is very low, the students graduation requirements is not high also. I also want to consult you, your school have any intention to cooperation with Chinese universities to cultivate students, including undergraduate, master's courses.
For example, in my school, for example, I have a preliminary idea of cooperation:
Now I am in the school is a full-time higher vocational schools, run by the local most student achievement is not very good.
Our school students read three years later can get issue diploma of specialized subject in our school. The students in our school after graduation, go to your school to read, 9-12 months from your school education in your country issuing authorities admitted undergraduate diploma. The number of recruit students of the first year at about 10 people, start from the second year the number gradually increased to 50-100 people, maybe more. Your school tuition fees to students about 150000 yuan a year.
But, in the first year of enrollment of students maybe the quality is not high, they may be difficult to go to your school learning, but you also want to try to ensure that they will be able to get undergraduate course diploma in one year later.
If you have cooperation intention, I can report to our school's leadership first, and then the content of the agreement to discuss specific.

追问

机器翻译的 ，还贴它干什么？

追答

嘻嘻我用的有道翻译

Answer 4

Just like I mentioned in previous messages, because your country has good English learning environment, many Chinese universities and schools in your country have carried out a number of projects to produce students. Some projects on the student's graduation requirements are very high and very low entry threshold of some projects, the students ' graduation requirements is not high.

I would also like to ask your advice, your school now have had the intention and cultivation of Chinese University students, including undergraduates, master's course.

For example, in my school, for example, initially, I had a vision of cooperation:

My school is now a private full-time vocational school, most of the students ' performance is not very good. School students reading at school after 3 years can I get my college diploma issued by the school. Our students upon graduation, went to your school reading 9-12 months, issued by your undergraduate diploma recognized by the Department of education in your country. First year enrolment number in the 10 or so, gradually increase the number starting from the second year to 50-100 people, or even more.

Your school tuition to students about 150,000 yuan a year.

However, the first year enrollment of students may not be of high quality, they go to your school may be more difficult, but you must try to ensure that they are able to obtain undergraduate diploma after one year. If you are interested, I will report back to our school leadership, and then discuss the specific contents of the agreement.

Answer 5

As my previous email as mentioned, because of your good English learning environment, many Chinese universities and your school have carried out a number of students cooperation projects. Some graduate students demanding, some project's entry threshold is very low, the graduation requirements are not high. I want to ask you, your school has no intention and Chinese university students cooperation now, including undergraduate, master course. For example, at my school as an example, I have a preliminary cooperation idea: I now of the school is a private full-time vocational school, most students are not very good. Our school