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You can speak to people on other side of the earth over the telephone with help of a satellite. They can help to take photos on the earth and produce maps. Some pictures taking by satellites show us the exact place where different metals can be found. They can also tell the differences between healthy plants or poor ones. This is a great help to the scientists work in forestry and in agriculture. Satellites benefit by out daily life. For example, satellites for broadcasting are used to sending radio and TV programmes from one part of the world to other. It is the satellites to make our world seem smaller.

Answer 1

1. speak 的固定搭配是 speak with， 但更建议用communicate with /chat with
2. on the other side
3. with the help of
4. 因为第一句用的a satellite 后一句主语应是it. 若想用they，前一句应该为satellites
5. 为了结构更平行易读，可以在produce前也加一个to。（to do A and to do B。）
6. pictures taken by stellites 应用过去分词做后置定语，如果用现在分词，那么动作的发出者就变成了现在分词前面的名词。
7. 因为你后面再说一些不同金属的位置，所以是show us exact places
8. They can also tell the differences between healthy plants or poor ones. They 按你的用法指代的是some pictures，但是图片不能分辨植物是否健康，只有人能分辨，所以有歧义，可以改为 Though those pictures，we can also tell the differences between healthy plants and the poor ones。
9. this 指代不明。改为Satellites can help scientists in forestry and in agriculture tremendously.
10. Satellites benefit by out daily life. 这句整个表意不太清晰，benefit 的主语应是受益者，例如，our daily lives also benefit from satellites。
11.be used to do 和 be used to doing 有区别，前者指被用于做某事，后者指习惯于做某事
12.radios
13.to the other
14.it is the satellite that makes our world smaller.

Answer 2

1. side加S 

2. take photos on the earth on改成of

3. Some pictures taking by satellites taking 改成taken

4. the exact place place加S

5. plants or poor ones. or改成and

6. scientists work in work改成working

7. benefit by by去掉

8. are used to sending sending改成send

9. the world to other other改成another

10. to make our world to改成that

11. 终于改完了，望采纳，谢谢哦